gallio1 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Please do tell me what i need to improve:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Artwork - Awesome,tho you need to add more background to the Death and Crop the Black from Death's Minion. OCG has errors,in the future - write LORE (effects),so your mistakes can be easily corrected. Effects are okay,Death is a bit too powerful (maybe if add "This card cannot attack the turn it's Special Summoned.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set,this card can only be Spec. Sum. by the effects of ..blablabla")Death's Shaman needs to be either Fiend or Warrior.Also,add "when this card is destroyed by battle" to make it more realistic.For Death'minon (This card cannot be destroyed by battle),add more drawbacks.Increase the cost to maybe 500. 7/10 will be 8/10 if you correct the errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 The effects are balanced enough, bordering the OPed end though the OCG needs work (use OCG thread) 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gallio1 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Thanks for the comments ill try to improve it as much as i can. and where do i type LORE (effects)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThaJuceman Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 O Whoa. OCG need to be improved.Thats the 1st card bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 i guess god for a newbie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BFlaherty13 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 OCG needs some tweeking, but 8/10 for a new user 7/10 for a reg, Great card for your first one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 The effects are balanced enough' date=' bordering the OPed end though the OCG needs work (use OCG thread) 7.5/10[/quote'] Yes. I would say the pic on the last card should be changed as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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