omegahunter9 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Here is another of my proposed cards for my fake deck duel ^_^Please rate, tell me if I messed up on the lore ^_^ Suggestions to balance the card are appreciated. "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 monsters. Unless your opponent pays 500 Life Points, any card on your opponents side of the field that targets this card is negated and destroyed. During your Battle Phase while this card is in defense position, add 1 Flame Counter to this face up monster. By removing 1 Flame Token from this card force 1 monster on the field to attack this monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 OCG needs work (use OCG thread). This'd be easier if you drop the lv down to 5 and drop the def down to 2000ish 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Too high of a def for it's last effect. The rest is ok. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omegahunter9 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 -Lowered the Defense to 3500-Made a minor OCG changeI'm not sure what is wrong with the OCG, I've looked over it a few times... but I am a noob so I'm probably missing something. As it stands now it literally translates to me: If your opponent wants to attack Fireblade they must pay 500 LP or their monster will be destroyed. If your opponent wants to use an effect on Fireblade they must pay 500 LP or their effect card will be destroyed. While Fireblade is in face up defense position he gets a Flame Token on each of the owners battle phases. When removing a Flame Token you select one monster on the field (even your own) and force it to attack Fireblade, this in turn activates his first effect, so if your opponent wants to keep a monster he must pay 500 LP plus any battle damage inflicted by attacking Fireblade or his monster is destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zowayix Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Is this monster supposed to require 3 Tributes to summon? Because the official rule is that monsters of Level 7 or higher require 2 Tributes. Add "This card requires 3 Tributes to summon" at the beginning of the text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
740kt Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 I believe you mean Flame Counter when you say Flame Token. Unless your opponent pays 500 Life Points, any card your opponent controls that targets this card is negated and destroyed. During your Battle Phase, if this card is in face-up Defense Position, place 1 Flame Counter on it. By removing 1 Flame Counter from this card, select 1 monster your opponent controls. That monster must attack this card. I think... Also, the title of this thread says Triple sacrifice monster. I'm not seeing where that is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omegahunter9 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Is this monster supposed to require 3 Tributes to summon? Because the official rule is that monsters of Level 7 or higher require 2 Tributes. Add "This card requires 3 Tributes to summon" at the beginning of the text. *Facepalms* Thank you lol.... I somehow totally skipped that in my mind. -Corrected the Cards effect to require 3 tributes to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 Nice card OCG: 8.5/10Image: 9.5/10Effect: 8.5/10Balance: 8/10Overall: 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted August 19, 2009 Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 I like counters but one thing is that you cant go crazy. This is kinda OP'd. It's forcing your opponent to pay 500 points and attack. If they don't pay, their card is destroyed. And unless it has high attack.. yeah. OCG needs work (use OCG thread). This'd be easier if you drop the lv down to 5 and drop the def down to 2000ishDo this and it will be better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
omegahunter9 Posted August 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 19, 2009 I like counters but one thing is that you cant go crazy. This is kinda OP'd. It's forcing your opponent to pay 500 points and attack. If they don't pay' date=' their card is destroyed. And unless it has high attack.. yeah. OCG needs work (use OCG thread). This'd be easier if you drop the lv down to 5 and drop the def down to 2000ishDo this and it will be better. 500 Life Points + Man-Eater Bug = Dead FirebladeI would fear Fireblade only as long as I didn't have something to kill it. 2000 Defense and 3 sacrifices, even with it's nice effect it is not the ideal of those "Powerful" triple sacrifice monsters. Fireblade is based upon something very specific, and his power needs to be reflected here the same as he is where I originally created him, at the same time I need to balance the card. As I stated previously I have looked over the OCG and found nothing wrong with it. If you can point out exactly what OCG needs to be corrected I would be appreciative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
msarocks7 Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 umm officially cards with over 7 stars dont need 2 tributes. it doesnt matte how many stars it has, anything over lvl 7 needs only 2 tributes unless stated otherwise on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Awesome card 9.756/10 (lol)on your last comment omegahunter i agree that with 2000 def he would how could i say be a little to weak. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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