Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 REMOVED EVERYTHING Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WWECENA Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 nice card & pic man they r balanced 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Thank you :) It's not perfect, though. Graveyard Witch has to be DARK. I'm working on it.Edit: Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Artwork - BeautifulOCG has errors (a Level 4 - Level 4,attack/defense - Attack/Defense)Effects are awesome,perfect for Necromancers.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 @Coreander: Ok, I'll edit it right away ;), thanks :DEdit: Done ;) Special Summon a Level 4 monster....I think that is correct :OIn Dutch I would say: Wanneer een Level 4 of lager monster...When a Level 4 or lower monster...In my opinion, it is correct, but I'll take a look at some real cards to see what is has to be. Edit: Emissary of the Afterlife: "Each player selects 1 Level 3 or lower.....". But I think that 'a' is also good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Well you don't have to put 'a',I think it's also good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 But then you have: When Level 4 monster... Special Summon Level 4 monster...That's far from correct English, you know :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuu-Ken Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Somehow I do think that the effects of Lord of The Dead is a little OP'ed, removing monsters from play when they're destroyed, negate effects of monsters when they're destroyed and Special summoning a DARK monster. If it were for me, I would remove one effect, but not the ability to Special Summon a DARK monster from your graveyard because that fits with Lord of the Dead.I would remove either the 'removing monsters from play when they're destroyed' effect or the 'negate effects of monsters when they're destroyed' effect. Furthermore, I would change it into: 'Once per turn, during your Main Phase you can Special Summon a Level 4 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face up Attack or Defense position. These suggestions would make it less OP'ed, because with the former effect, you could Special Summon any DARK monster from the Graveyard regardless of the Level of the monster, as with the removal of one effect, this would also make it less OP'ed, if you understand what I mean The rest is fine though, 7/10 :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 @Ryuu-Ken That's what makes this guy Lord of the Dead 8).The effect of negating Effect Monsters must stay. Otherwise, a simple Night Assailant could kill this monster, and I don't want that :P. Because 1 Fusion Material monster has the effect of 'removing from play', I thought that the Fusion Monster also needs that effect. But perhaps I can remove that one. Any Dark monster, that's exactly the idea. This card is powerful, so why shouldn't the controller be able to summon powerful cards? But perhaps you're right. If there's a Summoned Skull in the Graveyard, it can be returned to the field. I'll see what I can do ;) Editing is done. The effect of 'Negate the effects of Effect Monsters' has been removed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryuu-Ken Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 @Vailan That's better, it's not that OP'ed anymore :P, I'll change it into 8/10 . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Thank you :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Nice card's, however maybe you should lower Orson ATK and DEF or make it a 5* card A summoning effect is to strong for his stats.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 Level 4, 1800/1650 seems reasonable to me. He is not too powerful, not too weak. He can become stronger with Axe of Despair for instance...5* and 1800/1650 is not worth the sacrifice. 1800 ATK is just enough ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 20, 2009 Report Share Posted August 20, 2009 only Death Magician needs a better effect, the rest looks great 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I'll see what I can do ;).Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I just completed my Necromancy-set.UPDATE: The effect of Lord of the Dead has been changed a little bit: 500 LP to Special Summon a Dark Monster from the Graveyard' date=' instead of no cost[/color'] I've seen this picture before, on YCM. But I think it fits its purpose perfectly! :D. I really hope that these cards are not too OP. I tried to make it as balanced as possible. But if it needs a change, let me know ;). nice card & pic man they r balanced 9/10 Thank you :) It's not perfect' date=' though. Graveyard Witch has to be DARK. I'm working on it.Edit: Done.[/quote'] Artwork - BeautifulOCG has errors (a Level 4 - Level 4' date='attack/defense - Attack/Defense)Effects are awesome,perfect for Necromancers.9/10[/quote'] Somehow I do think that the effects of Lord of The Dead is a little OP'ed' date=' removing monsters from play when they're destroyed, negate effects of monsters when they're destroyed and Special summoning a DARK monster. If it were for me, I would remove one effect, but not the ability to Special Summon a DARK monster from your graveyard because that fits with Lord of the Dead.I would remove either the 'removing monsters from play when they're destroyed' effect or the 'negate effects of monsters when they're destroyed' effect. Furthermore, I would change it into: 'Once per turn, during your Main Phase you can Special Summon a Level 4 DARK monster from your Graveyard to your side of the field in face up Attack or Defense position. These suggestions would make it less OP'ed, because with the former effect, you could Special Summon any DARK monster from the Graveyard regardless of the Level of the monster, as with the removal of one effect, this would also make it less OP'ed, if you understand what I mean The rest is fine though, 7/10 :).[/font'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Why do you quote everything? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 me?welll I guess it became a habit and i didn't mean to quote that much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 If you want to say something that is (almost) the same as what someone else said, just don't quote him/her, but say: 'I share this opinion', or so ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 oh thanks man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 So, what is YOUR opinion about these cards? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 well i think the ocg is solid.Pics are great.Could use some work though.I think that this card is very inspirational to the new members of this site.It'll give them something to start on.9/10 BTW how many posts do u need to get 3 stars? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ok, thank you :D Ehm....I think when you have reached 150 posts, you get 3 stars. But don't start spamming in order to reach that amount as soon as you can! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon Eyes Kyo Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 don't worry I don't spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ok :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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