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Sephiroth card


azuandu

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Sorry mate, but the grammer isn't quite the same as the one used for Yu-Gi-Oh cards. It should say something like "When "Sephiroth" is summoned onto your side of the field, your oppoment has 5 whole turns to destroy this Monster Card as a result of battle. After 5 whole turns, if "Sephiroth" is still on your side of the field, you win the Duel"

 

Also, your card, due to the effect and it's ATK/DEF points, is INSAINLY overpowered!!! You need to make your card more balanced, give it a weakness of some sort, and please, give it a better/more resionable effect and reduce it's ATK and DEF points to 2000-3000 (Or over 3000 if it doesn't have an effect/one that will weaken it in some way)

 

At the moment, I'll give you 4/10 since your new here, but follow my feedback and I'll change ur rating, okey-doke? Plus, shouldn't he be Dark rather than Light?

 

T.T. :mrgreen:

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