My water cards

[djabber]

PLEASE REPLY and tell me if its overpowered or not. Gimme feedback =3

 

 

Please post-reply and comment me, don't hold back :)

 

EDIT: The adjustments to the cards. I hope its better now, if you still see flaws in them please post-reply.

(note: Im new to card making compared to you all D: )

[Vailan]

OCG needs change:

"If you half the original ATK of this card, you can attack again during the same Battle Phase. This also requires a cost of 200 Life Points"

 

"Increase the ATK and DEF of all WATER-types on your side of the field by 500 points. Also decrease the ATK and DEF of all FIRE-types by 400 points." (sounds like a field-spell).

 

Apart from that...you have done well.

[Bengal]

*WATER is an Attribute, not a type*

 

Actual OCG fix for the second card:

 

"All Aqua-Type monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF, and all Pyro-Type monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF."

 

Not bad, they aren't overpowered and the images are alright.

 

Make sure you use real types though, and don't confuse attributes with types.

 

6.5/10

[djabber]

Okay thanks you two for the feedback i'll be sure to adjust it and research some more about it all.

[kriskirla]

ummm...(If you half the original ATK of this card, you can attack again during the same Battle Phase. This also requires a cost of 200 Life Points)..i think you should change it like this(If you half the original ATK of this card, *this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. This also requires a cost of 200 Life Points)

[Peni]

0/5

[Nosferatu Reaper]

change the type of the first card

the pics are good

effects too plain

6/10

[ragnarok1945]

Djabber's Minion is not a real type, and the effects a little too boring

 

6.5/10