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[align=center]This is my first sprite tag. I wanted to see how well I would do without any tuts. I think it's alright for my 1st. Please don't flame about how bad it will be. Any comments or suggestions?

 

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I'll just limit myself to 2 critiques then:

Left side was made into a huge blinding mess, several of the c4d on that side are overcontrasted

The 2 levels of flames just don't make sense

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[align=center]This is my first sprite tag. I wanted to see how well I would do without any tuts. I think it's alright for my 1st. Please don't flame about how bad it will be. Any comments or suggestions?

 

iqkmqw.jpg[/align]

 

I'll just limit myself to 2 critiques then:

Left side was made into a huge blinding mess' date=' several of the c4d on that side are overcontrasted

The 2 levels of flames just don't make sense

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Thanks for the CnC.

I did horrible on trying to add lighting.

That's not flames. That's 2 C4Ds clashed together.

But, hey, it was my first.

 

v2

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any better?

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You just covered it up and made it look even worse

 

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When something is too bright you don't simply put up a darker layer and set it to darken, it looks like you just put a dark, slightly transparent paper over everything light.

 

You turn down the light itself, removing layers that caused the light to be brighter than how it started out to be until it looks good.

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You just covered it up and made it look even worse

 

...

 

When something is too bright you don't simply put up a darker layer and set it to darken' date=' it looks like you just put a dark, slightly transparent paper over everything light.

 

You turn down the light itself, removing layers that caused the light to be brighter than how it started out to be until it looks good.

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Ok, thanks ;D

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hey guys. sry for not posting in a while. i made my first OK sig with GIMP. hope you like it. (i like the contrast)

 

Rendered by Viva la Catman

 

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So, ummm, you slapped a render on a sparkle spammed BG with suckish text? Amazing. You're getting there. Use smaller sizes and don't put focal in the middle. Keep practicing =D

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