64rob64 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ok now I've fixed them up but still haven't got to the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sammidysam Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I can't fix the OCG(because it's more than 1 card) but it is off, and also, your ritual monsters have the wrong spelling. Yugioh.wikia.com is a place you can go to to see how to write ritual's effects. Plus your effect monster has typos and I hate typos. 6/10 +2 for first cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artix_Von_Kreiger Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Pics are a little blurry, and you spelled 'warrior' wrong. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Why mention Naruto? Dragon Lust: Meh, more like Dragon Bloodlust. Also does not function like a Ritual Spell. Glovin the Dark Dragon: Make it Level 7 or 9. And also, bad OCG and uncreative, nonexistent effect. Crowter the Mystic Swordsman: Mystic-Beast? That has more potential than many other fake types...but create more cards of the type. Anyways, Crowter sucks. Also, get better grammar. 4/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragoone Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Mystic Beast is non existant is called Winged-Beast or Fiend  Blurry picsnon-used theme,  6/10 - Get better pics, edit the type of card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
64rob64 Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 ok constructive critisism is great thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Ninja Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 OCG errors and spelling ( Warrior, not worrior)Blurry pics. Your Ritual Spell card should say this:This card is used to Ritual Summon "Glovin the Dark Dragon". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. Your ritual monster should say:This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dragon Lust". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. your 3rd card should say:This monster gains 100 ATK and DEF for every Warrior-type monster in the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WithTheWind Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 They may be your first, but these cards are just absolutely awful. Spelt Warrior wrong, fake types, bland effects, horrible OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 blurry pics, fake types, boring effects, and the OCG errors 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
64rob64 Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Well the effects aren't suppose to wow anyone. just save ur butt in a duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
64rob64 Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 up for a day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 These card isn't that bad for your first but change the image, I think it will make your rate higher. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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