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Magic Knight Rayearth CARDS. First full DECK! [40/40]

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This is my first FULL DECK!!!

[spoiler=DECK #1]

[spoiler=Magic Knights]

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Waiting for your (new) comments!!! :D

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=>MEWTWOZZ.

 

Yeah, I saw that when I went to the HELP forum...

I tried to both minimize the text (to keep it readable) and still make the effects understandable...

Since you gave me a high EIGHT - I think I somewhat succeded in that.

When (if?) I continue this set - I'll probably fix the OCG problems easily.

(Just need to follow the huge guide I found here.)

:D :D :D

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Magic Knights - too simple and similar effects. 5/10

Pillar - You should add "If this is the only monster you control, your opponent can attack directly." to avoid total blocks. You should make it to summon "up to 3 "Magic Knight" monsters with different names", in my opinion. 6/10

Mashins - again, too simple and similar effects. 5/10

Honou no Ya - the last effect should be changed to detroy up to 2 Spell or Trap Cards. 6.5/10

Akai Inazuma - seems fine with me, somewhat simple, but a burn deck could make it useful. 7.5/10

Aoi Tatsumaki - That last effect seems a bit overpowered (as the Hanshins are not that hard to pull out). 6/10

Mizo no Ryu - Discarding the whole hand of the opponent? It's very overpowered, no matter what... - 4/10

Koori no Yaiba - Seems okay, but I have the feeling that there are a bit too many effect damage cards in the concept... - 7.5/10

Midori no Shippu - Like the previous card, but with lower damage but skips 2 Battle Phases? Hm... - 5.5/10

Inashime no Kaze - Very overpowered. (you know, Time Seal - which skips the next Draw Phase of your opponent, and a Trap Card,not even a Spell Card - is forbidden. And your card is even more powerful than that...)

Mamori no Kaze - a temporary boost, simple but can be useful. 7/10

Iyashi no Kaze - a simple heal effect. 6/10

Hikari no Raze - impractical and overpowered.

Magic Knight of Fire/Wind/Water - I'm okay with these. Swarming effect for a Life Point cost, after all... 7.5/10

Princess Emeraude's Prayer - Considering the Life Point cost, it seems like a reasonable card. 7/10

Friendship of Magic Knights - make it "While you control 3 "Magic Knight" or "Manshin" monsters with different names..." 6.5/10 (if you change it, 7.5/10)

Support of Magic Knights - doubling is a bit too much. As even the Magic Knights getting doubled have 3000 ATK, and that's not even mentioning the Manshins... 5.5/10

Mokona - wow, that's some nifty effect, I like it! Creative using of Spirit monsters. 8.5/10

Guru Clef - too easy card advantage. Maybe make it "During your Draw Phase, instead of drawing a card, you can add 1 "Magic Knight of Fire", "Magic Knight of Wind" or "Magic Knight of Water" from your Deck to your hand. 6/10 (if changed, 7/10)

Kakuen Boujo - Simple DEF increaseing effect. Nothing more to say here. 5/10

Inazuma Shourai - the same effect as "Just Desserts", but with a Spell Card. Hm... 5/10

Seiyuu Raikai - make it return up to 2 monsters your opponent controls, otherwise it's a bit overpowered. 5.5/10 (7.5/10 if you change it)

Seiyuu Shoukan - That's pretty interesting, but I'm afraid it's very hard to balance ... 8/10 for the idea.

Mahou Denshou - "The A. Forces" has a similar effect. 5/10

Cephiro - a slow but stable effect. Amusing! 7.5/10

Ferio - simple effect, not much usability. 5.5/10

Lafarga - simple effect, but at least somewhat usable. 6/10

Presea , Escudo Armor - somewhat problematic to pull that out. Escudo Armor's effect is interesting, though. 6/10 for Presea, 7/10 for Escudo Armor.

Ascot, Majyuu Shoukan - Just with the other random Summoning card, very hard to balance out, but the idea is quite interesting. 8/10

Caldina - Take control of three units? If the one unit controller "Change of Heart" is Forbidden, what you think what would happen with that card ...

Hikari - Similar to Ferio, not that much to talk. 5.5/10

 

I have to say, while I find the idea of making cards based on this series good, but these need heavy reworking. I suggest you should take a look at real cards to avoid similarities with existing cards and to avoid balance issues.

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OK, thanks for a detailed review.

I'm sorry if I accidentally copied some other card - I don't know ALL the cards and neither do YOU...

Now some comments:

Magic Knights - I could change it to "each OTHER" making max=2500.

Pillar - I'll probably just change to "destroyed". The "different names" point is useless since I meant to restrict ALL my cards to only ONE per DECK. (I did call it a DECK rather than a SET.)

Mashins - simple doesn't make it less useful.

(Comment on Magics - you need a SPECIFIC monster to pull them out! I don't think the effects should be weak. I don't have ANY cards that let me DRAW. Also I TRIED to make them somewhat fit the Anime effects.)

Honou no Ya - see Comment on Magic.

Akai Inazuma - ok.

Aoi Tatsumaki - see CoM.

Mizu no Ryu - see CoM.

Koori no Yaiba - well, it's MKR based. And there aren't SO many damage cards...

Midori no Shippu - see CoM.

Inashime no Kaze - see CoM. Time Seal doesn't require a specific monster to activate.

Mamori no Kaze - ok.

Iyashi no Kaze - ok.

Hikari no Raze - practical (up to 5000 damage) and NOT overpowered (try first to get Combined Rayearth, hehehe...).

Magic Knight of Fire/Wind/Water - ok.

Princess Emeraude's Prayer - ok.

Friendship of Magic Knights - see Pillar.

Support of Magic Knights - I'll change it to lower numbers.

Mokona - why only 8.5???

Guru Clef - I'll rather make the effect not free.

Kakuen Boujo - see Mashins.

Inazuma Shourai - see Mashins & CoM.

Seiyuu Raikai - I'll probably do it.

Seiyuu Shoukan - ok.

Mahou Denshou - see Mashins & CoM.

Cephiro - why only 7.5???

Ferio - see CoM.

Lafarga - oh, so it's not "overpowered"??? Stand-alone, double attack, 1800 ATK monster is ok by you??? Why then do you attack my specific-monster-bound cards???

Presea - ok.

Escudo Armor - forgot to add "permanently increase". Also this one won't be called overpowered...

Ascot - ok.

Majyuu Shoukan - see CoM.

Caldina - not for free! I could change it to 1000 but see CoM.

Hikari - see Mashins.

 

One last point - there are only 16 monsters in my deck.

But the number of stand-alones with ATK >= 1000 is only 7!!!

I can have a full hand of Magics - but I won't be able to USE them if I don't have MONSTERS...

So my deck is far from being overpowered - unless I'm heavily helped by the Spirit of Cards... :D :D :D

 

Once again - thanks for the review.

Please, tell me what do you think about my cards after this post.

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For the accidental copies - it may happen from time to time. After all, I'm sure it happened with me from time to time, too. And my ratings are admittedly not perfect, I am aware of that.

I understand that you tried to make it with the idea of "the players will use the Deck in exactly the same way as I planned to", but sooner or later, someone will definitely try to come up with the best combination. And making them all Limited on their own is... well, interesting.

For the simple cards, I actually expected somewhat more unique effects (like the Magic Knights or the Mashins). Granted, a simple beatstick can be useful, too, but for me, creativity is just as important.

For the magics - granted, you need to have 1 particular monster for them, but considering they are not that hard to pull out, according to the actual gameplay, some of them are still a bit edgy in terms of balance - especially Imashime no Kaze (even with the minor Life Point cost).

For Mokona - well, it's indeed a good card... but I actually rarely give very high scores. For a simple effect, it's indeed creative, though. :)

Lafarga - a double attacker is not as much of a problem as a card which grants major card advantage to you or major card disadvantage to your opponent. Maybe 1800 is a bit high (1650 or 1700 would do fine)... but that's still not as problematic as some of the spells)

 

My opinion is that the way you are meant to make them played they can be balanced, but I'm pretty sure the players would try to twist their possibilities (not to mention parts of the decks could work well in FIRE / WATER / WIND decks). My combined rating for now is 6.5/10.

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Exa Raiun

Thanks for a detailed review (though the rating is less than I expected). :D

I actually don't see how can you make use of most of the cards in a way that's NOT how I made them - even if you can activate the spell through some fancy effect - you won't get much since ALL Magics clearly state they need a specific monster to work.

 

I do agree that the Magic Knights and Mashins could have had personal effects - but still not nessesarily so!

I was really going for the Anime to make them use Magics rather than personal effects. :D

 

Now back to misusing the cards.

The ONLY cards that could be used in a separate deck are:

Magic Knights - obviously they're totally stand-alones;

Pillar - as an impenetrable defense (but useless in offense);

Clef - as a medium strength "normal" monster;

Cephiro - as a cool field booster;

Ferio - same as Clef;

Lafarga - somewhat stronger than Clef;

Presea - as a weak "normal" monster;

Ascot - same as Presea;

Caldina - OK, THIS one is a great stand-alone;

Hikari - same as Presea.

 

But you CAN'T make use of:

Mashins - can't even summon them otherwise if I worded the effect right;

ALL Magics - again, totally relying on having the RIGHT monster on the field;

Magic Knight of... - just summons Magic Knights;

Prayer / Friendship / Support - same as above;

Mokona - useless without Magic Knights;

Escudo - same as Magics.

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