Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I've been reading the forums for a while but this is the first card I have made, so any ideas on how to improve will be great. 1 tuner monster + 1 or more Rock-type non-tuner monsters.If this card is destroyed and sent to your Graveyard by a card effect, it is Special Summoned to the field during your next End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 OCG is bad. Effect is way too overpowered. I'd change it into:Indestructible Colossus:"If this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards that designate this card" The current effect is way too OP, like I said. PIC is nice, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 "1 Tuner monster + 1 or more Rock-type non-Tuner monsters.All Battle Damage involving this monster is doubled. Negate the activation of any Spell or Trap Card that targets this card, and destroy that card."Also i'd definitely lowers it's ATK to at least 3000 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 WAY OPED effect. The pic is good though.. 7.5/10 Suggested effect: When a Spell or Trap card is destroyed while this card is face-up on your side of the field, you can Special Summon one "Rock Token" (0 ATK/1000 DEF) to your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ok I tried to make it less OP by lowering ATK/DEF & changing effect slightly and also tried fixing OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ok thats better. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 much betterit's actually a really good card now8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Thank you for your coments and imput. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 good card but even with the fix its OPed- 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 How about to balance it I remove the first half of the effect and replace it with a peircing effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 too powerful of an effect, it has no drawback to it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ω Link Ω Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 well take away part of the effect but other then that 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Ive changed it's effect so I hope it is'nt OP now, but if it is tell me how to make it balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 from what I see there has been no modifications. Maybe it takes a min to kick in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 I forgot to press save changes, then I posted saying I had changed it by mistake but it's been edited now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 that's even better nowthe effect even suits the name9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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