the final duel 1-3

[feline card maker]

Yugi walks home from school with Tea Tristan and Joey down the crowded streets of Domino city. Unknown to them, they are being watched. On the top of a large apartment building, 3 tall men in dark cloaks stand in the shadows of a bilboard advertizing a new gameshop.

 

The man on the left speaks first, "We only need the little one."

 

The three men step forward and jump over the side of the building and land on the fire escape. One of them jumps over the railing and slides down the rain pipe the other two follow.

 

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While yugi is walking, he tripped and drops his book. he reaches down to get it and picks it up.

 

Boom! A huge explosion is detonated on the curb. It sends huge hunks of concrete flying everywhere.

Yugi and Tristan are sent flying backwards, spiralling through the air. They crash through a large house window and land against a black leather couch.

 

Joey is thrown backwards into a red brick wall. pieces of concrete pelt him as he slumps over, unconscious.

Tea is grinded against the pavement until she comes to a halt outside of a card shop, where a couple of ten year old kids watch. Teas knees and elbows are skinned and bleeding.

 

the three mysterious men charge into the house with pistols, cocked and ready. two of the men grab Yugi and haul him off to a van parked outside.

 

"Tristan! Help" Yugi screams.

 

Tristan gets up and knocks the gun out of the other mans hand and punches him in the stomach repeatedly. He then reaches into the mans jacket and pulls out a detonator he pushes him backwards into the bathroom and pulls out the pin on the detonator which triggers an explosion planted underneath the left tires of the van. The left tires are lifted off the ground and flung sideways. The van does several flips in the air and hits a brick wall, the van smashes through the wall and hits the cold hard ground upside down.

 

Yugi squeals for help as the van catches fire and starts to crumble. Tristan runs to the scene and tries to pull Yugi out of the van, but his leg is stuck.

 

The flames spread across the van and the metal frame gets hot. Tristan starts to lose his grip.

 

Then Yugi is sucked back under. His wails for help suddenly stop.

 

Tristan is smashed over the head with something hard and everything goes black.

 

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Tea runs to Joey with her body skinned and bleeding. Tea tries to wake Joey up. "Joey!! Wake up!! Yugi is in trouble!" But Joey stays lifeless.

 

Boom!!!! A huge explosion comes from the a big warehouse that the van Yugi was in had crashed into. Tea tries to phone an ambulance on her cell phone but the batteries are dead.

 

"Come on you stupid phone! Work!!!" Tea screams.

 

Weeeoooh weeeoooh weeeeoooh! The police speed down the street with the lights flashing blue and red neon colours and park outside of the destroyed warehouse.

 

Tea tries to drag Joey out of the pile of rubble but his leg is held down with a big block of concrete.

 

Just then an ambulance rushes down the street. The ambulance stops in front of Joey. Three paramedics run out of the ambulance with a stretcher and haul Joey out of the pile of rubble and load him into the ambulance. Tea hops in too and they drive away not in the direction of the hospital.

 

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Yugis eyes slowly open to show a blurry silhouette.

 

"Hello Yugi. I've been expecting you."

 

There standing in the darkness was someone had hated right from the beginning of duellist kingdom. It was Weevil Underwood.

 

"Hihihihihi, you've fallen into my trap Yugi! now your going to duel me, lose and die!"

 

Yugi tried to move his head but it was impossible because it was strapped in by a clamp covered in leaves and bugs. "Aaaaahhhh!" Yugi cried, "Get these things off me Weevil!"

 

"Hihihihihihihi! That's right Yugi, cry. Cry for your soon to be dead friends, Joey, Tristan, and Tea."

 

The dark warehouse suddenly lit up and Yugi could see his three friends hanging from a rope above the duelling field. A huge spot in the floor collapsed and was chewed to pieces by a giant wood chipper.

 

"When your life points reach zero your friends will be dropped into the wood chipper and you will be sucked along with them!" Weevil cried evilly.

 

"And if I win?" Yugi asked.

 

"I'll throw my new deck into the wood chipper."

 

"What do you mean new deck?"

 

"Yes Yugi I no longer have an insect obsession! I have a mixed deck that nobody can beat! Hihihihihihihihihihihihihi!"

 

"Weevil you sick fiend! Why did you do this?"

 

"Because since duellist kingdom I've held a very large grudge on you for knocking me out of the tournament so early, and now I've come to take what's rightfully mine! YOUR LIFE! hihihihihihihihi"

 

Suddenly Yugis voice went deeper and he became taller and stronger. "Well then Weevil. I guess it's time to duel!"

[Kaisu]

Spell check, puncuate. This felt lifeless when I read it.

[Alexis Rhodes]

read a bit if it its ok :) i think i might make a story seems everyone else is :)

[Kaisu]

Huh?

you post no sense soeverwhat.