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I tried once to make one. Failed pretty bad. So now I'm trying again. This time the card is really Dark-Synchro-ish. It's Japanese. Its got negastars or whatever you call them. So here. The effect is simplistic on purpose. I think I messed up on the stars and the type box. Note: Super Milk Chan is not a joke card >_>

 

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Name: She who traverses the heavens endlessly(top), Spatial Wanderer(bottom)

Attibute: Dark

Stars: -7

Type: Angel(Fairy) • Dark Synchro • Effect

Lore: 1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monster

In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card. When this card Attacks, place 1 Syn Counter on this card. When this card has 5 Syn Counters on it, you can Attack your opponent Directly.

( I made a mistake on the lore on the card. )

 

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Name: Super Milk Chan

Attribute: Earth

Stars: -3

Type: Warrior • Dark Synchro • Effect

Lore: 1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monster

In order to Special Summon this card, subtract the Level of a Dark Tuner monster from the Level of 1 other monster you control; the value must equal the Level of this card.

Once per turn, place 1 Baka Counter on 1 of your opponents monsters. When there are 3 Baka Counters on a monster, Destroy it, and replace it with a Tetsuko Token(4 Stars /EARTH /Machine /500 ATK / 500 DEF) in Defense Position. The position of Tetsuko Tokens cannot be switched. When this card Attacks a Tetsuko Token, inflict 1000 Points of Direct Damage to your opponent.

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[align=center]That is not a Dark Synchro.....Anymore Anyway.

Dark Synchros Were released in Japan as NORMAL SYNCHRO TYPE MONSTERS

This would be refferd to as an Anime Dark Synchro.

 

Overall, 1 or 2 OCG Errors, Oh and you used a Translator didnt you, The JP text is all messed up, The start of the English lore is like 1 or 2 lines into the JP lore, The translator Sucked (No Offense)

 

Also save your images as .PNG not .JPG or JPEG

 

The Stars are Squashed into Oblivion xD

 

I see you holo'd Bits of the cards Boarder, don't do that, it makes the card look Ugly

 

Also, Cards look stupid without a Set ID Make it like "TMCS - JP000" etc. Do not put EN as thats for English cards.

 

The name is funked Up (Excuse my Language) No Offense. The Text on top of the name should Match the Attribute (WATER = Dull Blue Text) and The name is Squashed, It is a very annoying thing to look at.

The JP Text your using is currently on "Normal" setting, If you set it to "String" then it will look more appealing.

 

Overall; The cards are Okay, But the Dark Synchro Styling on them are a Bit Suckish, you need to work on them.

 

Good Luck,

- Dark Rose[/align]

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Thank you for being honest!

That's the kinda help and judgment I need.

Now granted, these are still like early work. So I know there are flaws and stuff.

Still, I greatly appreciate the words of advice. I will surely follow these.

 

By the way, it was google translator. I think flaws came due to my lousy placing of the text.

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