frdggs Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Err do i have to rate. Pics are horrid, effects are horrid and the OCG is horridNo Rate, Imnprove ancd ill rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andx Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 Effects are simple, ocg is bad, pics are bad, you used 1 pic twice, you made a vanilla which is not always bad but the pic is bad and you made no attempt at a description. The translation is try again. First before you worry about ocg you should worry about normal grammar. The first word of a sentence should be captitalized for one. Now your pics should have backgrounds and shouldn't be blurry and should definitely have color. Some of your names don't make sense or just need more thought. I don't want to rate these as it would not be pretty. You need to put some work into these. Sorry if I sounded mean but trust me, other people would really rip you up for this. I'm trying to be nice and help but sometimes my help comes off as rude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 way too simple and boring effects, blurry pics, and look at the OCG thread for OCG help 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted August 21, 2009 Report Share Posted August 21, 2009 ^ What ragnarok said. If you really need help, go asking around. I'm sure someone with some experience under their belt will gladly help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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