mrfrosty Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 a new card that prolongs any creatures life, wounded counters are like spell counters, only they subtract ATK and DEF from the monster, but, the monster needs 5 wounded counters to be sent to the graveyard. but with a drawback. you lose 1000/LP per times that it took to give your card 5 wounded counters. so if your opponenet has a strong monster, attack him with a bunch of small monsters, then destroy it with a spell! [spoiler=lore]As long as this card remains on the field, Monster Cards can not be destroyed in battle. When a monster takes Battle damage, place 1 Wounded Counter on the targeted Monster. For each Wounded Counter on a monster, the monster loses 600 ATK and DEF. When a monster has 5 Wounded Counters on it, the card's controller loses X1000 Life Points for each time the card was attacked. i had trouble with the terminology, please point out any errors. enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Many wrong spelling and OCG. Capitalize the first letter in the beginning of each sentence. graveyard=Graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 you should still say a max of wounded counters allowed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 That's pretty unique.I could see that being used with warriors. Why? Because it just seems cooler that way >_>8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 OCG errors and bad pic.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I thought the pic was nice . as for the errors, the will be fixed in a second i forgot to give credit for the picpic from deviant art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Fix:As long as this card remains on the field Monster Cards can not be destroyed in battle. When a person takes Battle damage, place 1 Wounded Counter on a Monster for each Wounded Ccounter on a monster, the monster loses 600 ATK and DEF. When a monster has 5 Wounded Counters, the monster is sent to the graveyard and the owner loses 1000 Life Points X the number of times the monster was attacked doesnt anyone know how to capitilize? Capilitize the first letter in "wounded" on the cards name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Fixed "now with capitals!" thank you namo, i was soo focused with the grammer, i forgot to capitilize. i read how you wrote it and to me it sounded like " whenever you take battle dammage you can place a Wounded counter on any monster." i tried to tweak it so it sounds like " this monster gets a Wounded counter when it is attacked" I'm not shure it worked..(cCounter^__^) thank's everyone, for your imput! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 yes but... a monster cant take battle damage...you do...the opponent who CONTROLS the monster -_- well I see what your getting at! 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 yes, but i dont whant the controler to take dammage untill the card is destroyed, get where im goin? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Fixed Lore in bold: As long as this card remains on the field, Monster Cards can not be destroyed by battle. When a monster takes Battle damage, place 1 Wounded Counter on the targeted Monster. For each Wounded Counter on a monster, the monster loses 600 ATK and DEF. When a monster has 5 Wounded Counters on it, the card's controller loses X1000 Life Points for each time the card was attacked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mrfrosty Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 shouldnt by be in? destroyed in battle? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 The image has words in it. You should try to crop that out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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