Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I fixed the OCG to my status tell me if you something else is wrong.[/center][/center]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/7932/375466y.jpg' alt='375466y.jpg'>[/center][/center][/center][/center]LORE:This card cannot be Special Summoned. When this card is Tribute Summoned place 3 Shadow-Counters on this card. Increase this cards ATK by 200 for each Shadow-Counter on "The Dark Gentleman". Each time this card attacks remove 1 Shadow-Counter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 for the 1st card, I'd change the dice effect to this:1: destroy all monster on your opponent's side of the field2 and 3: destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field or inflict 1000 pts of damage to your opponent4 and 5: destroy one monster on your side of the field or take 1000 pts of damage6: destroy all monsters on your side of the field except this card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 for the 1st card' date=' I'd change the dice effect to this:1: destroy all monster on your opponent's side of the field2 and 3: destroy one monster on your opponent's side of the field or inflict 1000 pts of damage to your opponent4 and 5: destroy one monster on your side of the field or take 1000 pts of damage6: destroy all monsters on your side of the field except this card 7/10[/quote'] K thank you i just changed the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 which I'm not seeing, don't know why it has to take a min to kick in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 which I'm not seeing' date=' don't know why it has to take a min to kick in[/quote'] wat cant you see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 well NOW I can see, a minute ago the lore wasn't changed, despite the fact you said you changed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harman1992 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 These are some good cards, goo pics creative effects, but work on OCG 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 hey thx for the ecourgenment tyvm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harman1992 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 no prob man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 i reaaly like that first card the effect was a cool idea. good job :) 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Man thx guys you really are helpful -TYVM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 [align=center]Good.If you are in process of fixing the OCG, then I will not comment on it.I'll comment on the pics and the rest of the cards.So, pics = Good.Effects = InterestingOverall: 8.5/10Remember, for OCG help, PM me ;)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr.Pepper-Cherry Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 [align=center]Good.If you are in process of fixing the OCG' date=' then I will not comment on it. Remember, for OCG help, PM me ;)[/align'] I fixed the ocg and made new cards so look at em and coooment plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 [align=center]OCG is better, but could still be improved, and that will come with time.By looking at other members thread and making more and more cards,you'll become better and better, and will use better OCG. New cards: 8/10Overall: 8.7/10 :-)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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