baa Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 there some of my cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 OK, look.Capitalize the name.Use a real type, and capitalize it.Capitalize the effect.Use correct OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 now your getting better :)there is some OCG errors but nice pics, also there is no wolf type, try beast/beast-warrior 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Wolf Type?Try BeastYou have some OCG errors6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baa Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 well weres your cards then? bradthecanivingfootlickerthanks for the ratings guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 OCG needs many changes:The Chain Werewolf:"When there is another 'Werewolf' monster face-up on the field, this card gains 500 ATK points" The Werewolf of the Mountains:"This card can only be Special Summoned when 'The Werewolf Hunter' or another 'Werewolf' monster is face-up on your side of the field". Wolf is not a real type, change it to beast or beast-warrior ;).Pics are nice :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazuma Ozuma Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 OCG needs many changes:The Chain Werewolf:"When there is another 'Werewolf' monster face-up on the field' date=' this card gains 500 ATK points" The Werewolf of the Mountains:"This card can only be Special Summoned when 'The Werewolf Hunter' or another 'Werewolf' monster is face-up on your side of the field". Wolf is not a real type, change it to beast or beast-warrior ;).Pics are nice :)[/quote']Um..Valian I'm new 2 can u help me if i need it ever? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 6/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Wolf isnt a real type -.- Although I guess they are good effects since I know what you mean. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Hey dude! Okay card! I just finished my first card but it's not that good, but that card of yours looks pretty decent! But it would be much better to use real types, normal capitalisation/grammar, and the sort right? But overall, it's a pretty okay card! I give it a 6/10, keep trying, you will get better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Right why do i see so many cards like this! 1 - OCG needs work, look at the OCG Thread for help.2 - Wolf isnt a real type, Use Beast/Beast Warrior3 - Capitilize please the Card Name and the beginings of your effects and when you state another card name use"Card name here" 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 both effects too bland, wolf is not a real type use the OCG thread to help you with OCG 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 No fake types please. All that needs to be said really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 well weres your cards then? bradthecanivingfootlickerthanks for the ratings guys Well since you asked Sea Manipulation Dragon [spoiler=Lore]1 Tuner + 1 Non-Tuner monsters When this card is summoned all WATER monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK and 200 DEF. If your opponent summons a WATER monster as long as "Sea Manipulation Dragon" is on your side of the field, the ATK and DEF of all the monsters your opponent control reduce to 1000. If one of the monsters your opponent controls has ATK and DEF lower than 1000, they are removed from play. After this monster's effect is activated, it is flipped into Defense Position for 3 turns. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 water monsters = WATER Atrribute monsterssummoned = Summoned (State which metrhod of summoning) 6/10 but its better then somones card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 water monsters = WATER Atrribute monsterssummoned = Summoned (State which metrhod of summoning) 6/10 but its better then somones card. Look at a Yugioh card. I'm almost certain it's just WATER. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 When your describing it in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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