Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I hope you guys will like this card, but I understand if you do not like it. Feel free to tell me about anything wrong with it. I know it is not that good atall but it is only my fourth card and I started today. Also, I'm running out of card ideas. Thanks guys for helping me greatly improve the card! Image is from deviant art, http://fc05.deviantart.com/fs30/f/2008/080/0/b/Sharkman_New_by_qBATMANp.jpg Please rate :). Fishykid Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 too bland of an effect, it needs another one (and in any case it's too powerful) 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks, it's okay. Thanks for the rating and the comment. Feel free to give me some ideas, cause I'm a very amateur card maker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 well for its boosting you could have said it gains 500 atk each time a spell card is activated or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Okay thanks, I'll go change that right now. EDIT: Done, thanks for the help buddy ^.^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 yes but that's just the atk boosting part. You should add another effect to it as well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I don't have a very wild mind, so that'll be considerably hard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 for now it is, just give it a little thought, I'm sure you'll come up with something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Well to me its not that O'ped comnsidering its starting ATK.7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Oh, I have an idea! How about you can tribute one monster on your side of the Field to add one Spell card from your Graveyard to your hand, once per turn during your Main Phase? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 that's still a bland effect added to it, but it'll certainly improve the card, so I accept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 The amount of Level Stars can be reduced ;), I guess.8 stars might be enough. Starting with 500 ATK, and 500 bonus for each Spell Card. I don't think it's ATK increases so rapidly. And I guess that the opponent will do anything he/she can to kill this card. Nevertheless, effect is usefull, and the pic is quite nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thank you Vailan, it means alot when you're a newcomer :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 This card has a nice effect. The pic is good, but its UP'd, because of the Summon Conditions. 7/10 But you might have use for an additional Effect..You could use this : "Increase this card's ATK/DEF by 500, each time a Spell or Trap Card is played. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap Cards, you control to increase this card's ATK/DEF by an amount equal to the number of destroyed Spell or Trap Cards, by this effect x 200." Or sth. like that.8 stars would be enough ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 This card has a nice effect. The pic is good' date=' but its UP'd, because of the Summon Conditions. 7/10 But you might have use for an additional Effect..You could use this : "Increase this card's ATK/DEF by 500, each time a Spell or Trap Card is played. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap Cards, you control to increase this card's ATK/DEF by an amount equal to the number of destroyed Spell or Trap Cards, by this effect x 200." Or sth. like that.8 stars would be enough ;)[/quote'] It is now officially perfect. Thanks, buddy :) I gave you a + rep. Do you want to be friends? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Yeah, for sure =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Well to me its not that O'ped comnsidering its starting ATK.7.3/10 That is what I was going to say. Anyway I like the pic on the card but even after the OCG fix, the OCG is still pretty poor. Effect is a little bland but I have definetely seen worse. I will give you a better OCG fix, a perfect one probably: Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 500 each time a Spell or Trap card is activated. Once per turn, you can destroy up to 3 Spell or Trap Cards you control to increase this card's ATK and DEF by an amount equal to the number of destroyed Spell and Trap Cards by this effect x200. May not be perfect, but it is still better than the last one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Hey Dude! not bad for a 2 Star You are better than me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Wow, I am now a 2 Star! I didn't realise! You know, I only joined the site about 2 hours ago! Where did the time go? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 well the old pic and name were way better.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Wow' date=' I am now a 2 Star! I didn't realise! You know, I only joined the site about 2 hours ago! Where did the time go?[/quote']Its because you have posted 25 posts or more so you are a 2 star member now PM Me for the post target for all stars :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugimaker2 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Its god when for powerfull! Another effect.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Its god when for powerfull! Another effect.5/105/10 Seriously you have no taste in cards More like 1,000,000/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fishykid Posted August 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 Lol thanks FireBoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bradthecanivingfootlicker Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 The pic could be a lot better. This goes with the effect too, which is quite bland and/or plain.6.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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