Balaxe Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Please comment on how to improve. When this card is Normal or Special Summoned, send the top 5 cards of your Deck to the Graveyard, this card's original ATK is treated as the number of Pyro-Type monsters discarded by this effect x 800. Once per turn you can send the top card of the deck to the Graveyard. I made this support card with molten rock in mind but not persificly for it.[spoiler=Support Card]Remove from play up to 5 cards from the top of your deck paying 500 Life Points per card. Then choose cards in the graveyard equal to the cards you removed from play by this card's effect, place those cards on the top of your deck in any order you choose. Thank you for veiwing my thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Goes good with FIRE deck. Very, very useful support. Although its all about odds. The pic has a little bit of weird text on it, but I'll go ahead and disregard that. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 The PIC is close to aweful, perhaps you should find another one ;). OCG has some flaws. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 @VailanI was looking FOREVER for a pic but just settled for this one. I started making cards yesterday so my OCG will have MAJOR flaws but the moment I just want to show people my cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Красивая Ведьма Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 The effect isn't bad, but the image isn't great. Its background is just brown and it has words in the pic. If you send me the image you used I can give it a good background and remove the words for free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb9990jr Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 pick a different pic it kind of sucks other than that good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Pic has issues. You need a background for it. Have you tried deviantart.com? Its a great resource for images. Your OCG is remarkably well for a newbie. I'm impressed you know what it is, as many who join here do not. Change the ATK to 0 and say, "This card's original ATK is treated as the number of Pyro-Type monsters discarded by this effect x 800." Overall, a good starting card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 This image is from deviantart. ;) I like the effect, but seems a lil' UP. I don't know. :? Rate - 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 By popular demand I changed the picture of the card and changed its name to match it. I also edited the wording of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Cool man, 9/10 good for a fire deck ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 OCG is good for someone new. Maybe put a comma between "Summoned" and "send". The effect is usefull, especially if your using a FIRE deck and i think its balanced, depends on which cards are on the top of your deck but is a bit bland. The pic is ok and in a way, does match the name. 8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 that's hardly actually going to get beyond the 2400 atk anyway. A little too UPed from what I see 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DesCrow Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 UPMaybe 1000 ATK per FIRE monster sent? Or give it an effect like "inflict 600 damage to your opponent for each spell card or trap card sent?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I dropped it's level by 2 so it only needs one tribute to summon.I'm making a support card for it as well (mabey 2). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 LS Burn? Not a bad idea... Work on it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 The effect is kinda funny, if you dicarded 5 spell or trap card. This card have 0 ATK. Maybe change to something that is more accurate. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I added to Demon of Molten Rock's effect and added a card that could be used in a combo with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Pic isn't the best, but I have definitely seen worse. There are some minor OCG errors, again I have seen worse though. The effect is great, really useful and it is balanced as well. The support card is unfortunately quite a lot worse than the monster, the pic is awful, the effect is confusing and there are more OCG errors.Overall 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Balaxe Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 It was like 3am when I made the support card so the quality is'nt the best, I'll change the pic/wording of the card later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 the pic's are awfull, but the effect's could work nicely in a FIRE deck.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 great for a fire/burn deckdon't like the pic though7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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