help- Rediliton, a card that could save your life

[mrfrosty]

i created this card to go with my card " wounded" incase it backfired

(If you want a link to the post, just say so) and did dammage to you. Rediliaton turns the battle dammage you take and converts it to how many cards your opponenet has to discardX1000 (for the measly price of two cards in your hand) but you still take the battle damage, unless you take more then 3000 dammage, then all dammage is dropped. but the problem came to when i was writing the card and didn't know how to word it. this is what i came up with:

 

 

(sweet image, huh?)

 

here is the lore,

[spoiler=]As long as this card remains on the field, Monster Cards can not be destroyed by battle. When a monster takes Battle damage, place 1 Wounded Counter on the targeted Monster. For each Wounded Counter on a monster, the monster loses 600 ATK and DEF. When a monster has 5 Wounded Counters on it, the card's controller loses X1000 Life Points for each time the card was attacked.

 

 

know i know the OCG is wrong, but i want you to halp me out with it. since i am asking for a correction, you do knot have to fear the new "no corrections or you get warned" rule

 

give your oppinion on it also, if you want to, but please help me with the grammer

[Enrise]

You must discard 2 cards from your hand to activate this card. This card can only be activated when you lose more then 1000 Life Points. Your opponent must discard one card per every 1000 Life points you lose. If your opponenet discards more then 3 cards then all Battle dammage becomes 0

 

I might try to get the Newer OCG in, Max Darkness might get the Older but still considered accurate OCG.

 

To activate this card you must discard 2 cards from your hand. This card can only be activated when your opponent inflicts 1000 damage to you. You opponent must discard 1 card for every 1000 Life Points inflicted. If your opponent discards more than 3 cards, all Battle Damage is reduced to 0.

 

That's just my guess.

The image seems a little awkward to me, what is it? :?

This card would be Set at 1 or 2, depending on the Meta, if this card were real.

It does seem pretty good though.

[mrfrosty]

Thanks, i like the first correction better

 

i dont know what it is either, I'd guess some sort of tecnology that creats a barrer?

 

This card would be Set at 1 or 2' date=' depending on the Meta, [i']if[/i] this card were real.

 

What?

[Enrise]

Thanks' date=' i like the first correction better

 

i dont know what it is either, I'd guess some sort of tecnology that creats a barrer?

 

This card would be Set at 1 or 2, depending on the Meta, if this card were real.

 

What?

 

I'm saying, if the card were real, depending on the Meta, which is IRL related to the game, this would be either Limited or Semi-Limited.

[ragnarok1945]

this should be better suited as a continuous spell card, not quickplay

 

7/10