Namo™ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 [align=center]Card: [spoiler=Lore]Discard 1 card and remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card from your Hand and Special Summon 1 "Locus-Like Creature Token"(Insect-Type/WIND/level 5/ATK 2000/ DEF 2000) to your side of the field. Everytime a "Locus-Like Creature Token" is Summoned, place 1 Counter on each of your opponents monster.(Even Face-Down monsters) Monsters with Counters on them cannot be destroyed by battle involving a "Locus-Like Creature Token(s)" [spoiler=Trivia]Abaddon is a Demon known as the Demon of the Bottomless Pit. He is said to bring the apocolypes. He controls creatures that are Locus-Like in structure but have the face of Men, the hair of Women, the tails of Scorpians, and the teeth of Lions. These Locus torment humans for 6 months before the apocolypes. [spoiler=Effect]The "Remove from Play" effect came from the "Bottomless Trap Hole" Card, seeing as Abaddon is the Demon of the Bottomless Pit. The "Locus" effect came from the creatures he controls. The "Not destroyed by battle effect" came from the reason that the Locus torment humans, not destroys them. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 "Discard 1 card and remove from play 1 monster on the field." and what? Is this a cost to summon, keep on field or something? "place 1 Token on each of your opponents monster". I think you mean Counter? Nice idea with explenations of origin and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thanks and fixed! Any other comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Good, Bordering the OPed side but still awsome 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Thank you! Anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohCM236 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I LOVE IT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 a little on the OPed end, still very versatile though 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I LOVE ITThanks a little on the OPed end' date=' still very versatile though 8.9/10[/quote'] And Thanks! Anymore!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ~BUMP!~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Well, because of a few OCG errors the first time around, I'll give it a 9.1/10I rather like the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thank you for the rating :3 Anymore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beyetta Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 OPed 7/10do you have a card of abaddon? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 OPed 7/10do you a card of abaddon? How So?Thank youWhaaa? 0_o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 the name of the tokens really annoy me, it just sucksby the way locus is a kind of car, locust is an insect kinda like a grasshopperand this card is OP'd anyways7/10 (with a few fixes this could be a great card) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 On the information page it said Locus sooooo w/e lol Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 well i'd hate to be swarmed by Audi'si think regular grasshoppers would be fine for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ~BUMPITY BUMP BUMP~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 OCG fix =P "Discard 1 card and remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn, by discarding 1 card from your hand you can Special Summon 1 "Locus-Like Creature Token"(Insect-Type/WIND/level 5/ATK 2000/ DEF 2000) to your side of the field. When a "Locus-Like Creature Token" is Summoned, place 1 Counter on each of your opponents monster. Monsters with Counters on them cannot be destroyed by battle involving a "Locus-Like Creature Token(s)"" The fixes I made, made it much more understandable (to me atleaset >>) its a fine effect and a great picture ^^ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 OCG fix =P "Discard 1 card and remove from play 1 monster on the field. Once per turn' date=' by discarding 1 card from your [b']h[/b]and you can Special Summon 1 "Locus-Like Creature Token"(Insect-Type/WIND/level 5/ATK 2000/ DEF 2000) to your side of the field. When a "Locus-Like Creature Token" is Summoned, place 1 Counter on each of your opponents monster. Monsters with Counters on them cannot be destroyed by battle involving a "Locus-Like Creature Token(s)"" The fixes I made, made it much more understandable (to me atleaset >>) its a fine effect and a great picture ^^ 8/10 Thank you :3 I'll fix that later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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