Long Face Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 there ya go! what do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 it needs an effect or support, and in any case it's too powerful 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 that thing is wayyy too powerful :oits also kinda dull without an effect..4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Face Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 EDIT:__________________________________________ is this more balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 You have made your own type up, try Warrior or Fiend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShinyBlade Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Nice it too powerful though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 demon overlord is not a real type, change this to a fiend type instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Why the period after Field in the second line?! must be a comma. Capitalize the "f" in Field and don't use "On your side of the Field" anymore, it's "As long as you control this card". Don't make supportless Vanillas (Non-effect monsters) and don't create fake types, like this 1 should be a Warrior; A slightly bland effect. 6.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Face Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 AUUUUGH!!! Okay,..... HERE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 I disagree it OP'ed , I remember a level 4 effect monster that negates traps when it attacks and I think it was stronger by ATK points than this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Fiend warrior is not a real type either. There's only fiend OR warrior, not both Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 Just Leave it as "Fiend" not warrior it cant be two types =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 People! what's with the Fiend?! he looks nothing like a Fiend, make it a Warrior and it should be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 he is the "Heir of the underworld" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Face Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 any more advice? I still am very new at this so, be gentle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 ok NOW it's much better balanced out, effect is bland, but that's fine I'll raise the rate to 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Long Face Posted August 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 He doesn't have to look like a fiend to be a fiend. He is a demon after all. Son of the all mighty King Krichevskoy!!!!!! (Who died tragically chocking on a black pretzel, his most favorite snack.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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