Curse Sasuke Posted August 22, 2009 Report Share Posted August 22, 2009 As you can probobly tell the seal of orichalcos inspired me to make these cards. I want feedback from you guys to see how well I have advanced in card making.P.S. If you are going to comment on how this is a rip off please dont post, I understand it a rip off but most cards people create are. Please comment and rate...enjoy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Eternal Trapping doesn't have an art nor a sensible effect. On Triple Calling, write the full names of the cards it can be treated as or just write "Orichalcos" Field Spell Cards. Blade-Infinity is just an Orichalcos exclusive version of Mist Body. Controller needs a different effect, like one that can be used over and over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Okay thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lsean Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Eternal Trapping doesn't have an art nor a sensible effect. On Triple Calling' date=' write the full names of the cards it can be treated as or just write "Orichalcos" Field Spell Cards. Blade-Infinity is just an Orichalcos exclusive version of Mist Body. Controller needs a different effect, like one that can be used over and over.[/quote'] What he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 5/10 it's ok but needs some work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 I think I read somewhere around that you can't use card pictures in another card's picture...Also "Eternal Trapping" is NOT a playable card - as much as I like Anime...Some OCG mistakes:1. "When this monster is successfully Normal Summoned or Set".2. Equipp.3. I don't like phrases like "put 1 counter per turn" - such phrases need to specify when exactly, during which Phase.4. This is not the first time I see this stupid phrase "this is not optional" refering to activation of an effect...Some lesser English mistakes too...6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Curse Sasuke Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Okay thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wwekid57 Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 pretty nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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