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Solar Steel Guardian - Monica (SELF DRAWN) PLS COMMENT (^_^)


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What do you think if it? :D PLS COMMENT!

I wanted to combine Fire and Machine (I was actually hoping for a BBQ Grill Parody.) and ended up with this celestial guardian of the sun. Negative comments are alright but don't blame me if I rate your card lower. (>.<) And Here it is.

 

 

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Solar Steel Guardian - Monica

FIRE

Level 8

Machine/Effect

ATK 3000

DEF 2500

Effect

 

As long as this card remains face-up on the field, reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters excluding this card by 1000 points. Discard 1 card each time you enter your Battle Phase. This card cannot attack a player directly.

 

Hope you like it. Enjoy. :D

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As long as this card remains face-up on the field, reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters except this card by 1000. You must discard 1 card to enter your Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

For such a good pic I suggest you crop a tiny bit off the bottom so the actual creature is more visible. Maybe reduce the ATK to 2700 or 2800 and DEF to 2200-2300 points.

UTA-EN001

(most single cards are EN(english)001(first/only card)

And give it a serial number

 

This is the first really great card I've seen in a while.

Before fixes 7.3/10

After fixes 9.4/10

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A very nice image for self drawn' date=' the OCG seems fine, and the effect is balanced.

 

Not the most creative effect, but it is fairly versatile.

 

8.5/10

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Usually, I don't put too complicated effects because the texts become unreadable. I really want to make them more unique but my brain is too tired from making the art. :D


As long as this card remains face-up on the field' date=' reduce the ATK and DEF of all monsters [b']except[/b] this card by 1000. You must discard 1 card to enter your Battle Phase. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.

 

For such a good pic I suggest you crop a tiny bit off the bottom so the actual creature is more visible. Maybe reduce the ATK to 2700 or 2800 and DEF to 2200-2300 points.

UTA-EN001

(most single cards are EN(english)001(first/only card)

And give it a serial number

 

This is the first really great card I've seen in a while.

Before fixes 7.3/10

After fixes 9.4/10

 

 

 

Now that's a Critic! :D When I post it again (as a set to my other cards), I'll do some of that. You get 1 Rep from me there. (^_^)

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A very nice image for self drawn' date=' the OCG seems fine, and the effect is balanced.

 

Not the most creative effect, but it is fairly versatile.

 

8.5/10

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Usually, I don't put too complicated effects because the texts become unreadable. I really want to make them more unique but my brain is too tired from making the art. :D

 

I understand, I have no problem with simplicity. If the text becomes unreadable though, just type it underneath the card (copy and paste from the card maker).

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OMG!!! You drew this???? Well' date=' I guess you can use editing software to make it look professional. :). Anyways, I dont c anything wrong with it sooo...9/10. Sry, to get a 10/10 you have to have like an edge.

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What kind of edge? (Seriously I want that 10 badly) :D

 

Well, my idea of the edge would be a very special effect. Something new and unique to the card, and rite on the border of being opd, but still cuts the balanced factor. (I know, its alot to ask for.)

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this is among the best self drawn pics ever

 

effect is well balanced too' date=' so I give it 9.9/10

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What have you got to loose with 0.1? (^_^) And does anybody know where the edit button (for updating) is? (newb question I know.)

Its one of the small buttons on the bottom right of the post...if you took my advice about the effect, I just hope you didnt overdue it... Its very easy to do that. (I speak from experiance.) 8) :shock:

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perfection is a flaw' date=' and that is why I almost never give 10/10s

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Kewl. No wonder your rep is so high. ('o')

 

well just think about it: exactly what do you hope to gain if you're right all the time?

 

I agree. That's so true. But anyway, how come you don't create any cards? (I mean, with the skill you have rating cards, I bet you can make extremely cool cards.)

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