Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 [align=center][spoiler=[color=#0000CD]Lelouch[/color]] This card cannot be destroyed if you have 3 monsters on your Field. If this card is attacked, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. By removing this card while face up on the Field, you can add 1 "Mark Of The Geass" from your deck to your hand. [spoiler=[color=#1E90FF]Suzaku[/color]] When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, each player selects 1 card from their hand and sends it to the Graveyard. If "Lelouch Lamperouge" is on the Field this card can attack twice per turn. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to draw 1 card from your deck. [spoiler=[color=#FF6347]Mark Of Geass[/color]] This card can only be Equiped to a monster with "Lamperouge" or "C.C" in their name. The monster equipped with this card gains 600 ATK and cannot be destroyed by Trap cards. If this card is destroyed, add 1 "Lelouch Lamperouge" or "C.C" from your Graveyard to your deck. This card is removed from play if destroyed by an Effect of a Trap or Spell card. (This is not optional). [spoiler=[b]Zero[/b]] This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by releasing 1 "Lelouch Lamparouge" on your field. This card's name is also treated as "Lelouch Lamperouge" while on the Field. Once per turn, you can select 1 monster on your opponent's field and Equip it to this card. This card gains ATK equal to the equipped monster's Level x300. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 "Lelouch Lamperouge" from your Graveyard. [spoiler=[color=#FF1493]Nunnally Lamperouge[/color]] This card cannot attack or be attacked. (Damage calculation is normally applied).Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to select 1 monster in your Graveyard and add it to your deck. If this card is released, draw 1 card from your deck. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Just some small OCG mistakes that I see: Lelouch This card cannot be destroyed if you have 3 monsters on your side of the field. If this card is chosen as an attack target, you can discard 1 card from your hand to negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. By removing this card from play while face-up on the Field, you can add 1 "Mark Of The Geass" from your Deck to your hand. Comments on the card itself: not sure if this will be broken or not. You could Special Summon it and use Inferno Reckless Summon to summon three of them, which would make an indestructible wall. If you're making this into an archetype, maybe you can make it so that its indestructibility effect takes place if you have 3 cards of the certain archetype with different names or something. Also, "its discard 1 card to negate attack" effect doesn't make it less broken. Just some suggestions.This card can only be Equiped to a monster with "Lamperouge" or "C.C" in their name. The monster equipped with this card gains 600 ATK and cannot be destroyed by Trap cards. If this card is destroyed, add 1 "Lelouch Lamperouge" or "C.C" from your Graveyard to your deck. This card is removed from play if destroyed by an Effect of a Trap or Spell card.The last part where it says the card being removed from play is not option is not necessary, as you don't really have a say in that situation... Just a note, "Field" should not have a capitalized "F" unless if it's the first word in a sentence. Rating: 8.5/10 Comments:-OCG could use some improvements-Decent backgrounds and images Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Ok Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 hmmm...not bad. I like my CG set better. (maybe its just because its mine.) anyway, as pointed out above, there are some OCG errors. we think Suzaku's pic could be better. We're thinking it gets a 7/10. not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Interesting. I'm working on some Code Geass cards myself, though considerably more complex than this, and Union monster based. Good to see more Code Gewass fans out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks and ill maybe add some Knightmare Frames and Union monsters :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 anbuman, would you care to take a look at my CG set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Side of the field is old OCG I think. So is chosen, I think its suppose to be selected. And yes, field is not capitalized. However, Deck is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks for the advice :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 cool card. where'd you find the pic? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 i found it on photo bucket. Thanks ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Its not that bad peoples Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted September 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 15, 2009 BumP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted September 16, 2009 Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 カード、良い写真が大好きです。場合、または攻撃することはできません攻撃されるだけ、どのようにダメージ計算のすべてに適用することができますか？ 9月10日 Good card, love the pic. only thing is, how can Damage calculation be applied at all if it can't attack or be attacked? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted September 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2009 Bump and Thanks :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted September 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted September 20, 2009 Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Does field have to be uppercased? Otherwise, I like them.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted September 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 20, 2009 Yes, it does Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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