Free Card Ratings

[DesCrow]

RULES

1 Card per person, per post.

Wait at least a week or so between cards (individuals, not all members)

Please be discerning with your cards, pick something you want rated, not something you just threw together for a chance at a +rep, REALLY bad cards will be ignored.

 

I will be using the following scale

 

Balance -/35 (includes PLAYABILITY, CHEAPNESS/FAIRNESS)

OCG - /25 (includes SPELLING MISTAKES and OCG ERRORS)

Decoration - /25 (includes PIC, NAME, SET, SERIAL, and EDITION)

Cohesion - /15 (includes PIC/NAME/TYPE/ATTRIBUTE COHESION and TOGETHERNESS)

Personal Opinion - /10 (Includes whatever-the-balls I want)

 

I will also include a couple notes about bettering the card (if possible)

Cards receiving 95+ will receive +1 Rep.

 

Cards with 90+ Will be displayed in this post.

[WithTheWind]

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can be Special Summoned from your hand the turn you inflict over 1500 points of damage to your opponent (except Battle Damage). When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 600 points of damage to your opponent. All Battle Damage dealt by monsters on your side of the field is treated as Effect Damage. When this card would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect, you can tribute 1 Pyro-Type monster to negate the effect of that card and destroy it.

[DesCrow]

VOLCANIC HELLBLAZE - BY MIDNIGHT_LONER

 

Balance - 31/35 - Seems like it could be easily abused, and make burn decks usuable again

OCG - 20/25 - A few errors, solid overall.

Decoration - 18/25 - Name is a TAD cliche and pic looks like smoke, and no background

Cohesion - 14/15 - Effect/name and such fit very well together

Personal Opinion - 8/10 - Fun card!

Overall I like it, it has some issues, and might need a drawback or two. But overall very solid card.

Total - 81/100 B-

[WithTheWind]

VOLCANIC HELLBLAZE - BY MIDNIGHT_LONER

 

Balance - 31/35 - Seems like it could be easily abused' date=' and make burn decks usuable again

OCG - 20/25 - A few errors, solid overall.

Decoration - 18/25 - Name is a TAD cliche and pic looks like smoke, and no background

Cohesion - 14/15 - Effect/name and such fit very well together

Personal Opinion - 8/10 - Fun card!

Overall I like it, it has some issues, and might need a drawback or two. But overall very solid card.

Total - 81/100 [b']B-[/b]

 

Care to tell me what's wrong with the OCG?

[◎Kaleidoscope]

Why not:

[spoiler=Effect]When this card is Summoned, each monster on your field loses 100 ATK and 200 DEF (not including this card). Each time your opponent declares an Attack on an EARTH monster, you can place 1 Quake Counter on this card. If this card attacks while it has 3 or more Quake Counters, activate 1 of the following effects:

-This card gains an additional 300 ATK for 3 turns

-Each monster on your field cannot be destroyed during your opponent's next turn

-All monsters on your opponent's field are destroyed, and you lose Life Points equal to the number of their Level Stars x30.

 

[DesCrow]

Fixes are in bold.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand on a turn in which you 1500 or more points of damage to your opponent (excluding Battle Damage). When this card destroys a monster by battle, inflict 600 damage to your opponent. All Battle Damage dealt by monsters on your side of the field is treated as Effect Damage. You can tribute 1 Pyro-Type monster you control to negate the effect of a card that would destroy this card and destroy it.

 

last sentence is more of a personal opinion type thing

[WithTheWind]

Fixes are in bold.

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from your hand on a turn in which you 1500 or more points of damage to your opponent (excluding Battle Damage). When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' inflict 600 damage to your opponent. All Battle Damage dealt by monsters on your side of the field is treated as Effect Damage. [b']You can tribute 1 Pyro-Type monster you control to negate the effect of a card that would destroy this card and destroy it.[/b]

 

last sentence is more of a personal opinion type thing

 

Who ever said that my card can only be Special Summoned from the hand? :P

[DesCrow]

SPEARMAN OF THE GROUNDSHAKING ROAR

 

Balance -25/35 - Good except for last effect, which makes it way overpowered.

OCG - 21/25 - A few mistakes

Decoration - 20/25 - Great pic, name is overblown, needs EN before the 001 in set #

Cohesion - 10/15 - All fits together quite well, but a bit jumbled

Personal Opinion - 7/10 - Seems a little all over the place

Change name a bit maybe Soldier of Quakespear or Earthquake Spearman - (some name), and fix or eliminate last effect.

 

Total - 83/100 B-

 

LOL, @midnight loner, I left out the word "inflict" sry. Also, I just assumed it was a nomi.

[Rehva]

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[spoiler=[color=#4B0082]Effect[/color]] This card cannot be Normal Summoned. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 card on your Field from play. During each of your Draw Phases, after you draw a card, you can send the card you just drew to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your hand. Once per turn, when this card attacks or is attacked, you can discard 1 Level 3 or lower monster from your hand to Increase this card's ATK equal to the sented monster's DEF.

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[Guest Merciful Idiot]

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[spoiler=Effect]Increase the ATK of all Reptile-Type monsters by 500. During each of your Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Dragon Guardian Token" (Dragon-Type/LIGHT/Level 10/ATK 3000/DEF 0) on your opponent's side of the field and have it attack a monster you control, if you do not control a monster, have it attack you directly, destroy the Token during the End of the Standby Phase. During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, Special Summon 1 "Dragon Guardian Token" (Dragon-Type/LIGHT/Level 10/ATK 3000/DEF 0) on your side of the field and have it attack a monster your opponent controls, if your opponent doesn't control a monster, have it attack him/her directly, destroy the Token during the end of the Standby Phase.

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[☨Genocide ☨]

One of my fav creations...hope its not too opd.

Reaper Of The Cards + Vampire Lady + Dark Magician Girl

Every turn during your Standby Phase, you may Special Summon from the Graveyard one level 7 or lower monster to the Field. All monsters summoned by this effect are Removed from play at the End phase.

[DesCrow]

Last 2 for tonight.

 

BLAZE TORNADO STORM DRAGON - By Anbuman

Balance -30/35 - A little underpowered if anything.

OCG - 20/25 - Good, "on your field" = "you control", "sented monster's DEF" = "discarded monster's DEF"

Decoration - 19/25 - good pic, and good for you with the img cred, set needs EN before the numbers, name is too complicated. Tornado Dragon or Hurricane Drake would be better.

Cohesion - 11/15 - Name doesn't quite fit, and pic is a tinybit distanced from name

Personal Opinion - 7/10 - I like it

NOTES: Make name simpler, fix OCG and a few other minor things. Maybe give it 500 ATK or something. Make sure its ATK is only increases during damage calculation or it's broken.

Total - 87 B

 

THE FOREST AND THE GUARDIAN - By Merciful Idiot

Balance -25/35 - Seems overpowered, maybe make the dragon token 2000 ATK?

OCG - 25/25 - flawless, as far as I can tell

Decoration - 19/25 - Name is long and generic and pic is a touch too realistic

Cohesion - 13/15 - Great cohesion, but I'm unsure why it creates a dragon token, but powers up reptiles.

Personal Opinion - 7.5/10 - Game changing effect. Decks could be made around it.

NOTES: I like it, but it's a touch overpowered, and possibly disastrous to both players. play it first turn, inflict instant 3000 damage.

Total - 89.5 B+