Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 [align=center] [spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 DARK monsters you control on the field. During your next Main Phase, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 Fiend-Type monster from your Deck to the field in Defense Position. When this card is destroyed by a Trap Card, inflict damage to opponent's Life Points equal to DEF of the Special Summoned Fiend-Type monster [spoiler=Image Credit]Deviantart.com[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 I think it should be: "by removing 2 DARK monsters you control on the field from play."My guess is as good as any with that part :SI think it's good. Especially with the German text, assuming it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks, actually I'm not from German, but I can speak German ^.^ Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vampire Warlord Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Pretty good, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks' date=' actually I'm not from German, but I can speak German ^.^ Thanks[/quote'] Funny, I'm German by blood, well, 75% roughly, but I can't even speak a good sentence of it. Maybe cause I don't try to :S Never really cared about learning languages, except for a select few. Oh yeah, you might wanna get rid of that text at the bottom right of the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Pretty good' date=' 9/10[/quote'] Thanks Thanks' date=' actually I'm not from German, but I can speak German ^.^ Thanks[/quote'] Funny, I'm German by blood, well, 75% roughly, but I can't even speak a good sentence of it. Maybe cause I don't try to :S Never really cared about learning languages, except for a select few. Oh yeah, you might wanna get rid of that text at the bottom right of the pic. Yes, but it's okay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Ugly ? the Story Conjurer. I can't remember what Teufel means though. Good Card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Hässlich Teufel, The Gesicht Conjurer : Ugly Fiend, The Face Conjurer Thanks for rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Hässlich Teufel' date=' The Gesicht Conjurer : Ugly Fiend, The Face Conjurer Thanks for rating[/quote']Hmph, could've sworn gesicht was story or is it gesichte? Oh well your welcome. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Hässlich Teufel' date=' The Gesicht Conjurer : Ugly Fiend, The Face Conjurer Thanks for rating[/quote']Hmph, could've sworn gesicht was story or is it gesichte? Oh well your welcome. :) I think it is face not story ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 [align=center]OCG and effect are good;Pic is good;The holo doesn't cover the entire pic D=That is maybe something to fix.Otherwise, 9/10 ^^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 @Zegun I'm not good at advance holo'ing So it's my bad ^.^ Thanks for rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 @Zegun I'm not good at advance holo'ing So it's my bad ^.^ Thanks for rating [align=center]You're welcome ^^And' date=' you only need to resize the holo, it's pretty easy to do.I'm sure there are tuts about making advanced holos.[/align'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Okay firstly, that image is eww. Secondly you just have to say "2 DARK monsters you control", and thirdly you might want to clarify that the FIEND is only summoned on your next MAIN PHASE after it was summoned, otherwise people will misread it and abuse the effect, which in turn makes the last effect screwy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 the effect is balanced out, the OCG looks relatively solid, I'll give it 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tempest Dahlia Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Not bad!Effect balances out with the attack and defense strength so it won't be broken.Pic is HIDEOUS, and not in a good way. But if that's what you like...Balanced card, bad pic. A few ocg errors. I'll rate it...7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks guys, I will do my best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Balanced effect and ocg kinda good8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 OCG looks good and the effect looks balanced. The Pic is ok but could be better. There is a purple border at the top left of the picture, i think its from the holo. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Thanks' date=' actually I'm not from German, but I can speak German ^.^ Thanks[/quote'] I was able to see it, because you made a little mistake =) (i'm german^^)... it should be "Hässlicher Teufel" not "Hässlich Teufel". But pic and effect are nice.8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Thanks ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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