Manpole Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Check out my cards, rate them, and fix any OCG errors you find please! All is appreciated! =D enjoy Bronze King Midus: When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, special summon 1 bronze token (0/ATK 1000/DEF) in face-up defense mode. If successfully flip summoned deal 500 direct damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed, it is sent to the out of play zone.Dark King Ulsirus: When this card is Summoned to the field, remove from play all monsters on your opponents side of the field Lvl 5 or lower to the out of play zone. This card loses 600 ATK for every monster effected by this card. This card cannot be summoned to the field if doing so would lower this cards ATK below 1000. When this monster is destroyed it is sent to the out of play zone.Doom King Ba'al: When this card is Summoned to the field, you and your opponent must discard 1 card from their hands to the out of play zone. This card gains 300 ATK every time a monster is destroyed while this card is face-up on the field. When this monster is destroyed it is sent to the out of play zone.Fire King Domitus: When this card is Summoned to the field, you and your opponent must both draw 1 card. This card gains specific effects per card tributed on your side of the field. 1 card tributed, Fire King Domitus gains 1000 ATK. 2 cards tributed, Fire King Domitus gains an additional 1000 ATK. 3 cards tributed, Fire King Domitus is not effected by Trap cards. When this monster is destroyed it is sent to the out of play zone.Gold King Melekh: When this card is Summoned to the field, change all face-up monsters on the field to defense position. This card gains 300 ATK for every monster in your out of play zone. This card cannot be Summoned to the field if all of your opponents monsters are in defense mode. When this monster is destroyed it is sent to the out of play zone.Metal King Ulrich: When this card is Summoned to the field you may shuffle 1 Spell or Trap card in your grave, or out of play zone back into your deck. This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle by a monster with 2000 or more ATK. If your opponent has no Spell or Trap cards on the field this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed, it is sent to the out of play zone.Ninja King Xiahu: This card can only be normal summoned to the field. This card can attack an additional time for each card in your opponents Spell and Trap card zone. When this monster is destroyed you can select up to 3 cards in your out of play zone and shuffle them into your deck, this card is then sent to the out of play zone.Silver King Vincent: When this card is Summoned to the field, all water monsters are destroyed excluding this card. This card loses 400 ATK and Def for every card on your opponents side of the field. This card cannot be Summoned to the field if your opponent has no monsters on the field. When this monster is destroyed it is sent to the out of play zone.White King Azeuth: When this card is Summoned to the field, remove from play all other monsters on your side of the field to the out of play zone. This card gains 600 ATK for every monster effected by this card. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, it is sent to the out of play zone.Thief King Adair: When this card is Summoned to the field, you may tribute this card to select 1 face-down Spell or Trap card your opponent controls and add it to your hand. When this card enters battle, roll a dice, add 100x the number rolled onto this cards ATK for this battle phase only. When this monster is destroyed, it is removed from play. A link to a new picture for my "Crown of Kings" card will be greatly appreciated...the one I'm using now is horrible. EDIT: (Added Thief King Adair)I wont be reposting all cards, but just as a note* I did change all endings to match "Thief King Adair" - "When this monster is destroyed, it is removed from play" I also changed part of "Undead King Iceus" effect to - "As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, no "King" monsters are effected by Trap cards during the battle phase." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 these get 9.9/10 for every card having reasonably balanced effects and awesome pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Thanks for the reply, I'll try to make this a whole deck... anybody else have any comments?All please rate ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akatsuki459 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Thanks for the reply' date=' I'll try to make this a whole deck... anybody else have any comments?All please rate ^^[/quote'] i give it a 9/10 too :Dits great i love it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Works great with Gren Maju Da Iiza 10/10. As for OCG errors, just one that stood out to me. "It is sent to out of play zone" should be "remove it from play" instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Thanks for the good ratings I'll try and keep this sort of work up I guess, and I'll go back and change all the cards endings to; "When this card is destroyed (some as a result of battle), it is removed from play." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohDeckLord Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Alot of them are overpowered.Example a Level 4 card with 3400 ATK and 3000 DEF is too overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 This whole deck is going to be of monsters level 4, and for the card your talking about with 3400ATK and 3000DEF (Silver King Vincent) that card has no effect that might lower its ATK or DEF, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KratosAurionX Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 effects are really neat,love the pics too9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YugiohDeckLord Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 I still just think some are too powerful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Yes, there are quite a few that have very nice effects, but all cards are removed from play when destroyed and all can be targeted by spell/trap cards. But still if you think some certain cards are just too OP'd, post here which ones you think they are and what you would change them too.. Im open to suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Manpole Posted August 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 :( nobody else has any comments or rates for me? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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