Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Main card here, rest to follow. [spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a face-up Machine-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2000 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, place 1 Cargo Counter on this card. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for each Cargo Counter on it. You may remove 5 Cargo Counters on this card to add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 a gain of 2000 atk and def seems a bit too much, you should lower it a little bit also you didn't say the max # of cargo counters 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Yeah, needs a little work, but the most of the deck is going to be weak cards that need the ATK and DEF. There's no limit on Cargo Counters atm, but I'll add one once I figure out a good limit. The thing is huge, so it has a lot of of space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 it's not that. The rest of your set could have weak cards, but what about existing high atk machine cards? You don't want them to have that huge boost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 it's not that. The rest of your set could have weak cards' date=' but what about existing high atk machine cards? You don't want them to have that huge boost[/quote'] you're right about that. i'll probably add a limitation like reducing the ATK and DEF bonus if the equipped monster has hgigher ATK or DEF, or adding extra ATK and DEF if it's equipped to lower ATK monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ok that's good. We don't want to have a 6400 atk Ultimate Ancient Gear Golem running around........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ...geez, that never occured to me...that would be a hell of a nightmare to face, wouldn't it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Card: OCG Fix "Once per turn if you control this monster on the field, you can equip this monster to a face-up Machine-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2000 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, place 1 Cargo Counter on this card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of Cargo Counters on it x200. You may remove 5 Cargo Counters on this card to add 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)" Bold = OCG Fix Italicize = Correct OCG (According to Current OCG. It's not a must change but it's a more current version.) Slash = Cut out. It is completely pointless You need a limit to Cargo Counters otherwise it's OP and 2000 is a tad to much it doesnt matter if all the other cards are weak its still to much. This card is slightly OP but it has a good idea behind it...6/10 and the picture needs croppong =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 ...geez' date=' that never occured to me...that would be a hell of a nightmare to face, wouldn't it?[/quote'] not exactly since it's still very vulnerable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Card: OCG Fix "Once per turn if you control this monster on the field' date=' you can equip [b']this monster[/b] to a face-up Machine-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2000 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, place 1 Cargo Counter on this card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of Cargo Counters on it x200. You may remove 5 Cargo Counters on this card to add 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)" Bold = OCG Fix Italicize = Correct OCG (According to Current OCG. It's not a must change but it's a more current version.) Slash = Cut out. It is completely pointless You need a limit to Cargo Counters otherwise it's OP and 2000 is a tad to much it doesnt matter if all the other cards are weak its still to much. This card is slightly OP but it has a good idea behind it...6/10 and the picture needs croppong =/ I know it needs some work, ragnarok already mentioned it, but hanks for the OCG help, and thanks for telling me anyways. ...geez' date=' that never occured to me...that would be a hell of a nightmare to face, wouldn't it?[/quote'] not exactly since it's still very vulnerable Well, right now it would have Piercing effect, can't be stopped by Spells/Traps when it attacks, and would have over 6000 ATK, and that's just what ic an remember off the top of my head, plus it would take multiple effects to destroy it, since I used Heavy Mech Supoort Platform's text, meaning anything that would destroy it, not just battle, is prevented. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 23, 2009 Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 Card: OCG Fix "Once per turn if you control this monster on the field' date=' you can equip [b']this monster[/b] to a face-up Machine-Type monster on your side of the field as an Equip Card, OR unequip it and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position. When equipped to a monster by this card's effect, that monster gains 2000 ATK and DEF. When the equipped monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, place 1 Cargo Counter on this card. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the number of Cargo Counters on it x200. You may remove 5 Cargo Counters on this card to add 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.(1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)" Bold = OCG Fix Italicize = Correct OCG (According to Current OCG. It's not a must change but it's a more current version.) Slash = Cut out. It is completely pointless You need a limit to Cargo Counters otherwise it's OP and 2000 is a tad to much it doesnt matter if all the other cards are weak its still to much. This card is slightly OP but it has a good idea behind it...6/10 and the picture needs croppong =/ I know it needs some work, ragnarok already mentioned it, but hanks for the OCG help, and thanks for telling me anyways. oh >> ^^; sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akumakagemaru Posted August 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2009 np, i appreciate the input. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor War Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Not bad to give the equipment monster a boost of 2000 ATK (because you must offer 2 monsters for this monster), but also DEF is OP and also i agree to limit the counters 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 This thing has no bad OCG! That is very good!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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