D.D. Warrior Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Credit for the art goes to whoever made it (it's an official pic for a card in japan). I saw that they made a real card for obelisk, but it wasd a bit op'd. So, I decided to make a revamp. Don't be harsh, be constructive. I'm a little rusty at card-making.It was:You must Tribute 3 monsters you control to Normal Summon this card (you may not Set this card). The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card cannot be activated. This card cannot be targeted by the effects of a Spell, Trap or Effect Monster. If this card is Special Summoned, it is sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. You can Tribute 2 monsters to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. This card cannot declare an attack the turn this effect is activated.I changed it to:This card cannot be special summoned. You must Tribute 4 monsters you control to Normal Summon this card (you may not Set this card). When this card is normal summoned, your opponent may special summon 1 level 6 or lower monster from their hand. The Normal Summon of this card cannot be negated. When this card is Normal Summoned, a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster Card cannot be activated. Once per turn, you may tribute up to 3 monsters you control to have this card gain ATK equal to the number of tributed monsters times 1000. This can not be targeted by the effects of spell or trap cards. (Spell or trap cards that do not specifically designate this card as a target still effect this card.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Well, your OCG isn't something to Woo about. But I love how you fixed it. It seems like a way better fix compared to the last effect. He's basically invincible in the Japan effect. Not bad my friend, not bad.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Incognito:. Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Dude that card is underpowered.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 Um you know they already made a legal Obelisk and that's the pic. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 If anything, the original Obelisk was underpowered =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 24, 2009 Report Share Posted August 24, 2009 that's already an Obelisk pic anyway, certainly better than the real Obelisk in terms of effect though 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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