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jikon

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I notice a lot of OCG errors, a lot of grammar issues.

Some Pictures could be better.

The first 2 vaniilla card's descriptions are intersting and somewhat creative.

The rest of you're vanillas I notice the descriptions look like effects. You might wanna change that.

Overall

6.1/10

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I notice a lot of OCG errors' date=' a lot of grammar issues.

Some Pictures could be better.

The first 2 vaniilla card's descriptions are intersting and somewhat creative.

The rest of you're vanillas I notice the descriptions look like effects. You might wanna change that.

Overall

6.1/10

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This^. Some of the pics are overused as well.

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