My Fusion Crad + Fusion Material Monsters!!!!!!!!!!!! plz rate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ultimas]

Here ar my 2 fuion Material monsters to make>

 

> KRAKKADON!

[Magister18]

pretty cool i like 11/10

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

Is Ocean Commander a real card?

[Ultimas]

No, Ocean Commander is my own card.

 

Thnx 4 rating. I will give u 1+ 4 rating!

[Guest Merciful Idiot]

I mean the pic, is it from a real Yugioh card?

[Ultimas]

... possibly. found it on google.

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here r some more plz rate.

x2 =

 

[Magister18]

hey thanks for the rep

[Ultimas]

ur welcome

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Who keeps donating points?

[Magister18]

not me lol

[Ultimas]

yeah, lol

 

here are my new ritual monster and ritual spell card plz rate.

 

 

to summon use this...

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odd more points...

[jacobmarioman1]

wow those are pretty good but they look like their from real cards

[Magister18]

no there not there is no such thing as ocean commander

[Ultimas]

No totaly my own

[Ultimas]

Odd still more points

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[121092]

Is super awesome!

10/10^^

[Deustodo]

I mah Firin my 9/10

[~Pheonix-The-Mudkip~]

i like the cards nice job i look foward to seeing more of that work. 10/10

[Enma Kozato]

pisces is a little too strong too be able to attack twice

[Milk-Chan]

Your ritual monster's text is a little...dated. But by no means bad.

8/10 overall.

TIP: Edit your post and put all your cards in one.

[Ultimas]

awsome. +1 rep to every one!

[cmc1234]

the pic for ocean comander is a real pic im preety sure

but when you want to post new cards dont put them in replys just edit the original post and then say updated or somthing along those lines

 

there is some ocg in your effects and some are to short and some dont have any effects

 

idk if i should be pointing that out in this fourm or not since i usally rate in realistic cards

 

so if not suppose to point out ocg and effects and those things someone plz tell me

[Ultimas]

there r NO OGC errors

[cmc1234]

ok let me show you the ocg

um you didnt post effects so ill just add what should be there

OCEAN COMMANDER

one should "1"

idk if there are more since iv never seen an effect for tokens

 

KRAKKODON

When this monster destroys a monster"AS A RESULT OF BATTLE"

one should be "1"

"OR" should be or

 

SHADOW DRAGON

i didnt get the effect but this is what it should be

If this card is used to Tribute Summon a Dark Monster

idk the rest since the effect was so confusing to fix but"sacrifing" is Tribute

 

DARKNESS DRAGON

you really should add some effect

 

LIVING CURSE

the effect should be:

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Offering to the Fiend". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 7 or more as a tribute from the field or your hand

 

Those are your ocg errors Capitilaztion errors and other errors fixed

 

 

Sorry i dont mean to sound mean when saying this im just trying to make you a better card maker

[Ultimas]

ok. thnx. i will fix right away.

[cmc1234]

ok good ill rate when i see done

Rate before fixes 5/10

idk what it will be when you make the changes but it will be much higher