Bengal Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 Onalu, the Sea Bound Simian Effect: If "Umi" is face-up on the field, you can Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, you can send face-up monster(s) you control to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 WATER monster with a Level equal to the combined Levels of the monsters from your Deck. If this card is Normal Summoned, you can send this card to the Graveyard during your End Phase to add 1 "A Legendary Ocean" from your Deck to your hand. When this card is sent form the field to the Graveyard except by battle, you can have 1 face-up monster you control gain 400 ATK. *Was made specifically to get out Levia-Dragon - Daedaulus. Please comment and rate* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 The card itself has much drawbacks. "If this card is Special Summoned in this way, you can send face-up monster(s) you control to the Graveyard (excluding this card) to add 1 monster with a Level equal to the combined Level of the monsters sent." I would say Special Summoned instead, because the monster you will ad to your hand will be the same as the monster sent, so you don't need that drawback. "If this card is Normal Summoned, you can send this card to the Graveyard during your End Phase to add 1 "A Legendary Ocean" from your Deck to your hand." You tribute a monster to get this card, then you tribute itself to get a Field Spell? I would use Terraforming instead. "When this card is sent form the field to the Graveyard except by battle, you can have 1 face-up monster you control gain 200 ATK." Only 200? It already have a low ATK so it could probaly be destroyed by battle not by a card effect. Nice idea thought, just pretty UP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 25, 2009 Report Share Posted August 25, 2009 200 atk boost is a bit too low, along with the fact its stats are too low as well 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Thanks to you both. I have edited the card slightly, the real point of this card is not to last very long on the field, only to be a searcher for Daedalus and then be sent to the Graveyard by its effect and activate its own effect. As for the 200, I choose that only because that is the boost Legendary Ocean gives. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 yeah I know that, but I had hoped you'd make the atk different so its effect wouldn't just be a monster version of A Legendary Ocean Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 So now...All monsters in your deck are pseudo-synchros? I commend your effort *bows* but this card breaks the game over, a thousand times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted August 26, 2009 Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 up'dgood ocgthough the level should be a 4 but i see you were trying to make it balanced8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 26, 2009 Thanks all, I will edit the card a bit again. When I first made the card, I tried to make sure it wasn't overpowered, but I guess that backfired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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