Yankee Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 I have mad a new set of dragon(Yes, I know, Annoying). Hope you enjoy. Nemesis: This card cannot be special summond. When this card is destroyed, it is removed from play. As long as this card is removed from play, inflict 300 damage to your opponents life point during every one of your standby phases. As long as this card is in the graveyard, inflict 300 damage to your lifepoints every one of your opponents standby phases.Snowbound: This card cannot be normal summond or set. This card can only be special summond by the effect of "Quick-Freeze". This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is destroyed, special summond one "Riptide - Dragon Of Water" to your side of the field. During your standby phase, you can inflict 500 damage to your opponents life points. If you do, you can only attack with one monster this turn. During battle between this monster and an opponents monster in defence position, inflict the difference to your opponents life points. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 You make a lot of the same card grammar mistakes:Special Summon, Life Points, Fusion Summon, Normal Summon, Graveyard, all need to be capitalized. When numbering, use the actual number (1, 2, 3), instead of the spelt out form (one, two, three), you should really spell check your cards as well, as many have a lot of spelling errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Instinct Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 there also should be some apostrophes in opponent's but these are good ideas4.5/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doji33 Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 well i dont like the pictures. grammers a bit off. otherwise good. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 I have added another card. Identitiy Theft. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 you probably spend alot of time on here dont you? eh, thats ok, the cards ideas are cool, as many of the people before me said, there are a lot of grammar errors, but all in all, i give u a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 22, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 Thanks for the rateing, and yes, I do spend alot of time on this site. I have no life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 lol thats cool, i will prolly spend all of time on here to =') Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted November 22, 2007 Report Share Posted November 22, 2007 well....lots of grammar, and you can see logos on the pictures...that's just lazy. "merciful" not "mercifull" and obsidian is spelled wrong. And I'm sure you meant Tempest instead of Temest. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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