Giant Shadow Worm

[matthew251]

Ijust made a card 4 the fun of it :D probably bad ocg plz comment and feed my dudes in my sig they need a bite to eat:lol:

the effects hard to read so here it is bigger:

1 Tuner+1 or more non-Tuner Monsters. While this card is on the field all DARK attribute Monsters excluding this card are destroyed the end phase of the turn they are summoned. This card gains 500 ATK points for every DARK attribute monster sent to the graveyard while this card is in face up attack position. While this card is on the field all spell cards are sent to the discarded insted of being sent to the graveyard.

 

PLZ coment:D

[AbbatonStrikes]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

While this card is on the field all DARK monsters excluding this card are destroyed during the End Phase of the turn they are Summoned. This card gains 500 ATK points for every DARK monster sent to the Graveyard while this card is in face-up Attack Position. While this card is on the field all spell cards are removed from play, insted of being sent to the Graveyard.

 

Re written for you the middle effect is a little to powerful espcially with this cards ATK and DEf lower em a little and the bonus for the DARK monsters and its a good card. I have done the last part in the way I think you was going for but not entirely sure...Wouldnt want this bad boy in my garden lol...8.5/10 nice card just needs some minnor touches!!

[DarthSuhail]

I kinda dont like the name (the Giant bit)

[awesomeuser]

With AbbatonStrikes' fixes, I'd say...

 

9.5/10

 

Good job.

[ragnarok1945]

it shouldn't gain 500 atk, it's too much, make it only 300 atk gain

 

9/10

[jaster_rogue]

nice pic, the effect are intersting

I think it's good

9/10