White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 [align=center]Hi people. This is a new card I made. This thread will only contain that card. Please tell me what you think about it. Enjoy! ^^ Here it is: Each time either player Normal Summons, Tribute Summons or Special Summons a monster, place 1 Fantasy Counter on it (Max. 3). You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 800 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, you must remove from play the 1st card at the top of your Deck. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play 2 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, you must search your Deck for 1 Continuous Spell Card. Then, your opponent puts that card in his/her hand.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kriskirla Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 The pic is nice Some OCG error: (Each time this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponent, *place* 1 Fantasy Counter on it. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, *you must remove from play the top card of your deck*. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, you must search your Deck for 2 Continuous Spell Cards. Then, your opponent puts these 2 cards in his/her hand.) What is the (Max.?). If all these things are change. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Ohh, this card would suck. It's effects are too weak compared to its costs. Balance them out. 5/10. And let's assume there is no maximum Fantasy Counter limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 The pic is nice Some OCG error: (Each time this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponent' date=' *place* 1 Fantasy Counter on it. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, *you must remove from play the top card of your deck*. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, you must search your Deck for 2 Continuous Spell Cards. Then, your opponent puts these 2 cards in his/her hand.) What is the (Max.?). If all these things are change. 8/10[/quote'] [align=center]Thanks, I'll fix the (Max.) thing. Though, I think my OCG is pretty good and original... C.C. Blitzer: The only cost there is is 1 Tribute... so it's not so Underpowered.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Läufer Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 pretty good card.8/10 and I think you should capitalize the "Battle Damage" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 pretty good card.8/10 and I think you should capitalize the "Battle Damage" [align=center]I'm not sure about that' date=' but thanks anywayz ^^ [hr'] It was edited ^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 The pic is nice Some OCG error: (Each time this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponent' date=' *place* 1 Fantasy Counter on it. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, *you must remove from play the top card of your deck*. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, you must search your Deck for 2 Continuous Spell Cards. Then, your opponent puts these 2 cards in his/her hand.) What is the (Max.?). If all these things are change. 8/10[/quote'] [align=center]Thanks, I'll fix the (Max.) thing. Though, I think my OCG is pretty good and original... C.C. Blitzer: The only cost there is is 1 Tribute... so it's not so Underpowered.[/align] 1 Tribute ---> ConInflicting Battle Damage and gaining only 1 counter ---> ConRemoving from play the top card of your deck ---> Con (mostly)Giving your opponent 2 Continuous Spells ---> Con (mostly) The latter 2 can help with milling. Using 2 counters for only 500 damage ---> WeakRemoving from play 2 Spellcasters from the Graveyard --> Specific type + Graveyard = Weak Con + Con + Con (mostly) + Con (mostly) + Weak effect + Weak effect = Underpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 The pic is nice Some OCG error: (Each time this monster inflicts battle damage to your opponent' date=' *place* 1 Fantasy Counter on it. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent. If you do so, *you must remove from play the top card of your deck*. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, you must search your Deck for 2 Continuous Spell Cards. Then, your opponent puts these 2 cards in his/her hand.) What is the (Max.?). If all these things are change. 8/10[/quote'] [align=center]Thanks, I'll fix the (Max.) thing. Though, I think my OCG is pretty good and original... C.C. Blitzer: The only cost there is is 1 Tribute... so it's not so Underpowered.[/align] 1 Tribute ---> ConInflicting Battle Damage and gaining only 1 counter ---> ConRemoving from play the top card of your deck ---> Con (mostly)Giving your opponent 2 Continuous Spells ---> Con (mostly) The latter 2 can help with milling. Using 2 counters for only 500 damage ---> WeakRemoving from play 2 Spellcasters from the Graveyard --> Specific type + Graveyard = Weak Con + Con + Con (mostly) + Con (mostly) + Weak effect + Weak effect = Underpowered. I fixed it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 It's looking better. But it gain counters a bit slowly. Now 7.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 It's looking better. But it gain counters a bit slowly. Now 7.3/10. Fixed that (tried to). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archwing Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Its okay but the text on the card and the effect under it dont match up at all :? oh well, its a okay card, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Its okay but the text on the card and the effect under it dont match up at all :? oh well' date=' its a okay card, 8/10[/quote'] [align=center]I know, I was goin' to fix that, 'cause I only fixed the text under the card for now.Thanx for the rating by the way ^^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Think this is how it should look: Each time either player Summons a monster, place 1 Fantasy Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Then, remove from play the top card of your Deck. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play up to 2 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, search your Deck for 1 Continuous Spell Card. Then, your opponent puts that card in his/her hand. Very cool card. The ATK is a bit on the low side for a 5 Star and the pic and name makes me think that it should be a WATER monster. The effects are very balanced and original. As of now, 6/10. Pump up the ATK and I'll place it as a 10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Each time either player Summons a monster' date=' place 1 Fantasy Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Fantasy Counters from this card to inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. Then, remove from play the top card of your Deck. You can remove 3 Fantasy Counters from this card to remove from play up to 2 monsters in your opponent's Graveyard. If you do so, when this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by a card effect controlled by your opponent, search your Deck for 1 Continuous Spell Card. Then, your opponent puts that card in his/her hand.[/quote'] [align=center]Any rating? Comment?I don't like it when people only post OCG fixes.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Sorry, I was updating my post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrie Lupia Blitzer Posted August 27, 2009 Report Share Posted August 27, 2009 Looking better now. Just boost the attack and it'll even be more awesome. 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 quite impressive effect for it, it's balanced Atk isn't high enough though 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 [align=center]I'll fix the ATK.Thanks for the ratings.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 let me know when you do and I'll re-rate it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 You can cut the Tribute Summon part. Tribute Summon = Normal Summon. Maybe Flip Summons? 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 ATK score was changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 all right, I'll raise the rate to 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 all right' date=' I'll raise the rate to 9.4/10[/quote'] Thanx ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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