Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Hello :D that my cardi hope you like it and fix the OCg for me :) i changed the name too :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Good picture, name is meh. I am not quite sure of it's effect, how do you destroy a counter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 when a monster atacks him he destroys a counter and not him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Artwork is okay.OCG has errors.Effect is okay. [spoiler=OCG fix]When this card is Normal Summoned, place 3 Spell Counters on it. You can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to prevent it from being destroyed by battle. Each time a Spell Counter is removed from this card, increase this card's ATK by 300. 6.5/10 - with errors7.9/10 - without Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 and rate pleas :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 You should add that to the card. I don't rate cards, I don't feel qualified to do that :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 okay i edited it and i changed the name ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 ahwhat he heckocg needs to be fixedpic is alrightname could be changeseffect is alright7.9/10ok card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 You should add something along the lines of: "When this card is attacked, destroy a Counter instead of this card" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 k i changed the effect , say me if its OK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xazeon Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Nice, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 It's alright 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13fh04135cb Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 not bad 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 It is Target, not targed. I am not sure it is Spell Counters or just Counters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devon James Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 its spell counters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 its good for being first card, but name could be betterFixed OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned, place 3 Spell Counter on it. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to increse its ATK by 300. pic could also be slightly better, but I know how hard it is to find great pics. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 its good for being first card' date=' but name could be betterFixed OCG: When this card is Normal Summoned, place 3 Spell Counters on it. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Spell Counter from this card to increse its ATK by 300. pic could also be slightly better, but I know how hard it is to find great pics. 9/10[/quote'] Now thats real OCG right there XDits also fixed! Nice card! For a new member, youre a good cardmaker, though the name could be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 thx guys :') i gonna fix the OCG right now and give me ideas for the name :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Shino....and he/she is a spellcaster and a FIRE-type. Shino the Fire Mage, perhaps? ;) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 lol yea good idea :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 You're welcome ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 so is 3 counters the max it can hold on this card? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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