Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 [align=center]Yup. A single. Enjoy. Lore:When this card is Summoned select and destroy up to 2 Monsters. You can negate the effect of a Spell Card which targets this card and flip this card face-down. When this card is selected as an attack target, return it to your hand to negate the attack. So, yeah.Enjoy. ~Leviathan [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Some OCG errors, but the effect seems OK, but I guess that the first effect is a little OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 The third time I see that picture today, though it is indeed nice. Does it have to be a god? Also the effect is not very creative it is indeed useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 dude that card is unbattable Oo if its always negates the atacks and destrys the spells and traps anyways love the pic 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Some OCG errors' date=' but the effect seems OK, but I guess that the first effect is a little OP'd.[/quote'] *facepalm*Written Card Section. Visit more often. The third time I see that picture today' date=' though it is indeed nice. Does it have to be a god? Also the effect is not very creative it is indeed useful.[/quote'] Father Wolf makes Epic Pics.Levitas Deus = Lightning God.Creative? I just though of it when I made the Written version of it. dude that card is unbattable Oo if its always negates the atacks and destrys the spells and traps anyways love the pic 7/10 Gods should be immortal, in a way. I decided to make it this way.But I never mentioned anything about Traps in the effect.lrn2read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 oops sorry , soo that card isnt immortal , could easily destroyed by a trap card :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 But that's why we have support cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Indeed Father Wolf makes great pictures, and they are used alot, but the picture is very fitting and that is what counts. In my opinion you should rename it "Levitas Deus", but that is just me :P Great Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 ^So, just rid of the rest after the "Levitas Deus"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ruy Blackbird Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Yes. The word "God" is kinda clichee, and gives the wrong impression. "Levitas Deus" rolls better off the tongue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dvirmeir Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 9/10 grate card ant grate effect it's not 10/10 cuz there is no perfect in this world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 9/10 grate card ant grate effect it's not 10/10 cuz there is no perfect in this world Cough, I object to that.You can make a 100% on a Rock Band/Guitar Hero song on Expert. That's perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 OCG fix: When this card is Summoned, you can select up to 2 Monsters on the field, and destroy them. When this card is targeted by an effect of a Spell Card, you can negate that effect and destroy the card. If you do, flip this card face-down. When this card becomes an attack target, return this card to your hand to negate the attack. OP'd, looks good though. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 OCG fix: When this card is Summoned' date=' you can select up to 2 Monsters on the [b']f[/b]ield, and destroy them. When this card is targeted by an effect of a Spell Card, you can negate that effect and destroy the card. If you do, flip this card face-down. When this card becomes an attack target, return this card to your hand to negate the attack. OP'd, looks good though. 8/10 Um, bout the OP thing:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-150537.html There are some who disagree.I'm not saying that though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 9/10 grate card ant grate effect it's not 10/10 cuz there is no perfect in this world Cough' date=' I object to that.You can make a 100% on a Rock Band/Guitar Hero song on Expert. That's perfect.[/quote'] So true. Perfect bowling, et cetraOCG fix: When this card is Summoned' date=' you can select up to 2 Monsters on the [b']f[/b]ield, and destroy them. When this card is targeted by an effect of a Spell Card, you can negate that effect and destroy the card. If you do, flip this card face-down. When this card becomes an attack target, return this card to your hand to negate the attack. OP'd, looks good though. 8/10 Um:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-150537.html There are some who disagree.I'm not saying that though. Hmm... Monster Attack is not OCG-correct and field is is small cap'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 All changes have been fixed, OCG fixer: Griffin999 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 [spoiler=OCG fix]When this card is Summoned, you can select up to 2 monsters on the field, and destroy them. When this card is targeted by a Spell Card, you can negate the effect and destroy the card. If you do, flip this card face-down. When this card is selected as an attack target, return this card to your hand to negate the attack. -monsters are only capitalized when you say Monster Cards-field is never capitalized -it's not necessary to put "targeted by an effect of a"-"When this card becomes a target of a Monster Attack" is incorrect OCG. Artwork is epic,tho overused.OCG has errors.Effect is OP'ed,add a drawback. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 [spoiler=OCG fix]When this card is Summoned' date=' you can select up to 2 [b']monsters[/b] on the field, and destroy them. When this card is targeted by a Spell Card, you can negate the effect and destroy the card. If you do, flip this card face-down. When this card is selected as an attack target, return this card to your hand to negate the attack. -monsters are only capitalized when you say Monster Cards-field is never capitalized -it's not necessary to put "targeted by an effect of a"-"When this card becomes a target of a Monster Attack" is incorrect OCG. Artwork is epic,tho overused. It's new <_<OCG has errors. Griffin999 is practically, if I'm not mistaken, one of the best OCG fixers.Effect is OP'ed,add a drawback. It first goes face-down, and if the opponent attacks, it goes to teh hand. It requires 2 monsters to summon. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coreander Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Overused doesn't neccesary mean bad.I wrote that fix I didn't see the edit.For effect the same as the ocg,and it's not that hard to have 2 or more monsters for a Tribute,plus 2100 is not a small DEF. And you don't have to bark each time someone criticizes you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Overused doesn't neccesary mean bad.I wrote that fix I didn't see the edit.For effect the same as the ocg' date='and it's not that hard to have 2 or more monsters for a Tribute,plus 2100 is not a small DEF. And you don't have to bark each time someone criticizes you.[/quote'] I'm not >_>And I can't bark. I'm not a dog. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 effect 1 makes it slightly OPed, the rest of the effects are good though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 What's effect 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 the fact that it destroys 2 monsters when it's summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted August 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 Up to 2 monsters. But that's actually a typical Thunder type effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 28, 2009 Report Share Posted August 28, 2009 yeah, but you said it can do that in ANY form of a summon, and that's what makes it Oped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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