OCG Practice

[carrotop]

ummm, well, here I am again, learning the curves...

 

Yeah this time around, I thought about making some Spell and Trap cards so...I just gave it a shot. ^^

 

please post what i need to do to fix the errors, and

a the rule why I needed to change it.

if its spelling errors heh, just say so.

 

please no hate comments

Thanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Milk-Chan]

These are better! I see great improvement since last time!

Now, there are still errors, but that's ok.

Some monsters do not have a type.

Nowadays we use Tribute instead of Sacrifice.

There are a few Grammatical errors, but majority I can understand.

Cards are fairly balanced, and I give you a 9/10!

[DesCrow]

If you post their effect below the pics I will be glad to fix your OCG.

[Devon James]

Same here 10/10

[Deustodo]

Imah firin' my 8/10

[BoltDragon]

So I see you like fake chicks :lol:

OCG error (I think):

Pirates secret beach "...to the graveyard TO draw 1 card..."

Akalight "... if you opponent has only monsters in defense position..."

Amisha "...a monster with 2000 or more ATK...

Backstore thing- the same as Amisha

Bullets of Carnage Nah just a spelling error, you wrote Phrase instead of Phase.

Elf Sacred light: read ^^^^^^

Land maidin spell: A monster equiped with this card is not affected by Spell card. This effect lasts 3 turns.

Forest flight: Im shure there is a OCG error but I dont know how to fix it

Wabaro Scrapyard- Synchros cannot be in your hand, they are at the Fusion/Synchro deck.

 

Id give these cards a 9/10!

[.Requiem]

Where did you get the image?

 

Also LP = Life Points.....

 

your side of field = you control.

 

All numbers and in numerical form.

 

8 or higher

 

capitalize Graveyard

 

Anything with card is capitalized unless card is by itself.

 

I will look for more.