Plz comment and help my fix me cards [completed]

[~.Da Fro.~]

Plz help me because Im still new at making cards(not exactly to the site though) and I need help fixing them.

BTW PLZ dont be rude.

 

My sets:

[spoiler=Reseracted Angels]

 

[spoiler=Angel's Diamond]

[spoiler=lore]Equip only to a "Ressurected Angel" monster. The equipped monster gain 500 ATK.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Angel's Light]

[spoiler=lore]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all "Ressurected Angel" monsters gain 700 ATK.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Angel's Soul Binder]

[spoiler=lore]Activate only when your opponent attacks a "Resurrected Angel" monster on your side of the field. Negate the attack. During the second End Phase after this effect was activated, destroy the attacking and targeted monster.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Forbiden Angel]

[spoiler=lore]This card's ATK and DEF are equal to the number of "Ressurected Angel" monsters in your Graveyard x 200.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Dogu]

[spoiler=lore]While this card is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select a face-up "Ressurected Angel" monster as an attack target except "Ressurected Angel-Dogu".

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Hell Gaurdian]

[spoiler=lore]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Kamiga]

[spoiler=lore]When another reserected angle is in play kamiga gets 100 extra attack pts.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Quince]

[spoiler=lore]Each time your opponent inflicts Battle Damage to you, this card gains 200 ATK.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Tigarie]

[spoiler=lore]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Reserected Angel-Warlord]

[spoiler=lore]This card gains 400 ATK for each "Ressurected Angel" monster in your Graveyard.

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme's]

 

[spoiler=Omega Thunder Shock]

[spoiler=lore]Detsroy any card on the field as long as the controler has one monster with "Omega Supreme" in its name on the field.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omegas Kingdom]

[spoiler=lore]Once per turn pick any "Omega Supreme" and increase its atk/def by 1000 until the end of the next 2 battle phases. The same "Omega Supreme" can not be used twice with this effect at the same time.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Dark Reincarnation]

[spoiler=lore]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Omega Supreme-Dark General". You must also offer monsters as a Tribute whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Deflection]

[spoiler=lore]Equiped monster cannot be effected by any monster effects.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omegas Overload]

[spoiler=lore]2 monsters with Omega Supreme in its name.

 

 

 

[spoiler=The First Omega Supreme]

[spoiler=lore]When "The First Omega Supreme" is on the field, no monsters with "Omega Supreme" in its name can be destroyed.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Head of Omega Supreme]

[spoiler=lore]Flip Summon any monster with Omega Supreme in it's name.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Complete General]

[spoiler=lore]Once the greatest General of the Omega army, he was banashed for replacing his organic self with nothing but machine parts.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Dark General]

[spoiler=lore]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Dark Reincarnation". Once per turn select a monster card zone, that zone cannot be used until "Omega Supreme-Dark General" is destroyed.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Dragon Rage]

[spoiler=lore]This card can also be treated as a Machine type.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-General Stage #1]

[spoiler=lore]This card can also be treated as a spellcaster. When destroyed send this and any opponets card to there corisponding deck.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Hades]

[spoiler=lore]Flip. Remove from play all opponets cards on the field.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Hera]

[spoiler=lore]When any "Omega Supreme" is on the field, no magic or trap cards can be activated.

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Kamidogu]

[spoiler=lore]For every "Omega Supreme" on the field increase "Omega Supreme-Kamidogu" atk x100

 

 

 

[spoiler=Omega Supreme-Ultimate Soilder]

[spoiler=lore]Created to be the ultimate super soilder. This iron willed warrior is the last of its kind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Note: There are some cards with no effect, I would appreciate if someone could help me out with making one. Pts will be given to those who help me with the effects.

[WithTheWind]

Make Angel's Light a Continuous or Field Spell, otherwise the effect is useless. I see no OCG errors, but try to make more of these cards. 9/10.

[ragnarok1945]

not bad for pics and effects, several have too bland ones though

 

the OCG is solid, so 9/10

[~.Da Fro.~]

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[~.Da Fro.~]

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