Jump to content

[JG] Japanese Booster Ad [JG]


JG.

Recommended Posts

What's that you say? I made a Booster Ad? Yes I did. I used EHK's Template as a guide and no more, only stealing resources and such lol.

 

I also resized it, so it can actually fit on your average screen.

 

2rpsies.png

 

BG = Stolen from EHK

Tech Circle = Stolen from DG

Render = Blood Rose's Archive

Rest = Me

 

I know there are no sparkles, but I can't do sparkles to save my life, so screw that. I considered also creating an English one. Opinions? It would be rather different, sice Jap lettering fills less than English (Wherever those originate from).

Link to comment
Share on other sites

:|

 

okee dokee.. The AGGC is way too big, as well as the tech circle. Try reducing their size..

The text on the title of the pack seems off.. like it is too thin and it is beveled way to much..

While you are at it, try making the text color for the title a bit darker.. Not necessary, but it would look better.

Try changing the tech circle background swirl to an orange color, like it should be. ;)

 

Anywho, pretty good for a try. i am still glad that i started a fad.. XD

 

[6/10]

 

.kale

Link to comment
Share on other sites

You know what?That BG is MY idea!

 

Here

Look closely at the BG of the ads.It looks JUST LIKE yours.U should look at the time i posted it' date='too!

And EHK asked for my temp,then i gave him that temp in the upper topic,only for learning purpose!

[/quote']

 

Actually, the time I've asked it from you, the day I've downloaded it, I've modified it, I used the BG Chidori posted, I only used the top 3 logo above and replaced everything in it

Link to comment
Share on other sites

I said it's just the IDEA-the four-pieces BG!U re not a ripper,just an idea thief :P

@JG:Don't need to give me credit for that BG.Seriously!

Some nub cnc:

Main text's font is wrong!Try another font,and add more effects in it!

Ad's Japanese name is wrong .Don't ever use Google Translate for that!

The white hole of the booster still there!

Render needs outer glow!

Recolor the part inside the text circle,or add some effect into it!

Don't bevel the white text!

The vertical text's bevel should be softer!

The cards for the card preview should be OCG,not TCG :)

Add some sparkles next time :P

That's all I can say!Try harder next time!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Archived

This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.

Guest
This topic is now closed to further replies.
×
×
  • Create New...