--Vast Hero-- The Shine (hand drawn)

[Baragan]

 

EFFECT:

 

'Vast Hero-Universum'+'Vast Hero-Force Man'

This card can be only Fusion Summoned.This card cannot be destroyed by battle,except by a Normal Spell Card.If your opponent activate a Normal Trap Card,this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly.If this card is in Defense Position,your opponent cannot draw cards in his/her Draw Phase.

[G-Force Dragon]

I like , but the effect is a litlle OP.

[Baragan]

for a LV10,it is not OP.

[ilikesharks2020]

^This^

 

You should try to join the hand-drawn club! :)

[ragnarok1945]

atk could be slightly higher, overall the effect is balanced though

 

9/10

[Brendano Harns]

Picture is very good. Colored Pencils?

 

[spoiler=OCG FIX]

1 "Vast Hero-Universum" + "Vast Hero-Force Man"

This card cannot be Summed, except by a Fusion Summon. This card cannot be destroyed and by battle. This card cannot be destroyed by a Card Effect, except by a Normal Spell Card. When your opponent activate a Normal Trap Card, inflict damage to your opponent equal to this card's ATK. As long as you control this face-up Defense Position monster, your opponent cannot conduct his/her Draw Phase.

 

 

 

Very Overpowered, as it doesn't have any drawbacks.

 

Great job, though. ^_^

[Baragan]

Yes it is colored with pencils.

[Vailan]

Cannot be destroyed by battle...except by a Normal Spell Card. But they cannot be activated in the Battle Phase. Only Quick-Play spells like Offerings to the Doomed can be activated during the Battle Phase.

This effect is therefore complet nonsense. 'Destroyed by battle' means that the monster is destroyed by another monster. Spell Cards have nothing to do with that.

 

You must skip 'Except by...' etc.

 

"This card cannot be destroyed by battle".

Traps and Spells will be able to destroy it.

 

Pic is OK.

 

7/10