Enma Ai Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 [align=center]Here is my first Japanese Booster Pack Advertisement. Please Enjoy, Love, Hate, Comment! Renders; Blood RoseTech Circle; Mr. Epic (Dark Galaxy)Booster Font; Neo Sans (Aero looks ugleh and skinny to meh)Sparkles; Me!Mostly everything else; Me![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 i like it :) did you make it yourself or use a template bacause i might make one :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 :| i dont really like it, but i am a little biased. im glad i started a new fad now though. XD alrighty, here is my complaints: for this to seem realistic you need to have the text in the right spots. The title needs to be in the upper corner, and the info on the pack needs to be on the middle right. so, switch those two. The text seems two many different colors... try sticking to just one central color. ;) The Dark Magician focal seems a little off center, as well as the tech circle. Try moving them closer to the center by just a little bit. They seem too far off to the side. I dont like the stars. They seem way to congregated at the packs, and they are waaay to big. It is a very good attempt, though, and i rather like you green color. ;) [5/10] .kale Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 i like it :) did you make it yourself or use a template bacause i might make one :) I based it off a Template' date=' but I didnt use one :| Aww, dont give me that look i dont really like it, but i am a little biased. im glad i started a new fad now though. XD Yay for you alrighty, here is my complaints: for this to seem realistic you need to have the text in the right spots. The title needs to be in the upper corner, and the info on the pack needs to be on the middle right. so, switch those two. I know where they are supposed to be, I just wanted to Mix up some stuff, It doesn't always have to be realistic, thats the point of GFX, to experiment. =DThe text seems two many different colors... try sticking to just one central color. ;) Orange, Green & And some color that looks like Sh!t, how could you not like it xDThe Dark Magician focal seems a little off center, as well as the tech circle. Try moving them closer to the center by just a little bit. They seem too far off to the side. Okay will doI dont like the stars. They seem way to congregated at the packs, and they are waaay to big. Yeah I screwed them up It is a very good attempt, though, and i rather like you green color. ;) Thankies[5/10]Wow .kaleOMFG, YAY! ^^^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GHawk Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Hey, do you want Japanese Text to put on it? I have it. Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 where are the templates i cannot find any ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Looks very good to me, someone who knows nothing about this sort of thing. The gold Japanese text on the right is cool. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Text on the booster is my only problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 You stole my idea =/ Anyways, bevel some of the text, it look better. Also, the sparkles/dots look absoulutely terrible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enma Ai Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Hey' date=' do you want Japanese Text to put on it? I have it. Very nice.[/quote'] Sure, Just realized >.< I forgot JP Text under the name... where are the templates i cannot find any ? Graphic Tutorials' date=' or Search using the Search button >.> Looks very good to me, someone who knows nothing about this sort of thing. The gold Japanese text on the right is cool. ^-^ Thanks Catman Text on the booster is my only problem. Its quality was reduced with my Terrible attempt at Resizing using Free Transform >.> You stole my idea =/ Anyways' date=' bevel some of the text, it look better. Also, the sparkles/dots look absoulutely terrible.[/quote'] 1. What Idea? The resizing? Yeah, Resizing is kewl xD Big stuff is ugleh when it stretches the page 2. Yeah, they look nice when they are small on boosters, but on this it looks like sheet. Thanks for the comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 I mean I made the Ad first, you made one right after lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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