Deustodo Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 "Without ideas and devianart" corporation made this: [spoiler=Lore]This card is also treated as a Thunder-Type. It can only be Summoned by Tributing 1 "Magneton" from the field. Choose 1 Machine-Type monster on the field (except this card), the chosen monster cannot attack until this card is destroyed. If this card is destroyed by battle, put 1 "Magneton" from your Graveyard in your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 I have a few comments to make:-A card should not have two written types. If you want it to be treated as two types, then you should write so in the effect (i.e. "This card is also treated as a [insert type]-type.")-I think the Magnemite and the Voltorb family should have LIGHT attributes (DARK is the last one that I'd give Voltorb), and the latter should just be a Thunder type.-The 3 Regi's don't fuse together to form Regigigas; Regigigas is just the king of all the Regi's and not necessarily their combined form. Also, I don't think Regigigas should get all the typing of the 3 Regi's either. -For Regigigas' effect, don't use percentages to determine Life Points cost; it should say "Pay a quarter of your Life Points..." as opposed to 25%. Also, the effect seems a bit overpowered.-Some OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 I have a few comments to make:-A card should not have two written types. If you want it to be treated as two types' date=' then you should write so in the effect (i.e. "This card is also treated as a [insert type']-type.")Right-I think the Magnemite and the Voltorb family should have LIGHT attributes I guess. (DARK is the last one that I'd give Voltorb), and the latter should just be a Thunder type.No of them are machines.-The 3 Regi's don't fuse together to form Regigigas; Regigigas is just the king of all the Regi's and not necessarily their combined form. Also, I don't think Regigigas should get all the typing of the 3 Regi's either. Right but if Deustodo wants them to fuse that way, it is fine.-For Regigigas' effect, don't use percentages to determine Life Points cost; it should say "Pay a quarter of your Life Points..." as opposed to 25%. This is OCG, there is other OCG too. -Also, the effect seems a bit overpowered.Not really, Armed Dragon LV10 needs to discard 1 card to destroy all face-up on opponent's side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Not really saying that Regigigas shouldn't be a fusion; I just think that there are better options for it to be presented as a card. What I would have in mind when making a Regigigas card is a nomi card that can be special summoned when the 3 Regi's are on the field. As for the Regigigas vs Armed Dragon Lv10, it is true that Armed Dragon has a fewer cost, but let's not forget the following:-Armed Dragon can only destroy face-up monsters, while Regigigas can destroy everything.-It is easier to pay Life Points than to discard a card. Usually, for Regigiga's effect, you're looking at the most 2000 LP for Regigigas's effect and the cost can easily be broken later on in the game.-Regigigas is easier to summon than Armed Dragon lv 10 for being a fusion monster. Armed Dragon requires you to destroy monsters in battle in order to bring out their stronger counterparts, except for lv 10 (which can only be summoned from your hand), and that's too much work to bring out 1 card (killing cards in battle and having to get lv 10 in your hand). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 ok...but i didn't get it, these cards are good or not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 They're OK cards, just no multi-types. You could say that they can also be treated as another type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
danilyu Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 Sorry, forgot to rate. 7.5/10. Here are my feedbacks in a nutshell: -Good pics, especially Regigigas (maybe because it looks realistic?)-No multi-types; that should be taken care of by an effect-OCG needs some work-Regigigas' effect needs to be more balanced, IMO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deustodo Posted August 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 thanks, i create a card of Magnevolt, the last stage of magnemite but i didn't post it because the picture wasn't the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted August 29, 2009 Report Share Posted August 29, 2009 good cards and really awesome pics10/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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