The Random Bystander Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 The tuturial certainly helps!:lol: Anyways, I screwed up my first one, this is my second, smae cards. These are my first cards, first set, please give good feedback, thanks!:D"Smae" is supposed to be "same," sorry."Smae" is supposed to be "same," sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Come on, any feedback, please? I'm impatient, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hentrik Posted August 30, 2009 Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 I like your set and you chose a good theme, but most of your cards are the same, and you repeat the word ''Amazing'' and ''Inspiration'' in your cards too many times, so next time try not to make the cards so similar. Also get a better picture for ''Scribbles'' card. Other then that it's a decent first set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted August 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 30, 2009 Well thank you, I'll keep that in mind on my next set. Scribbles was my very first card, I was kind of messing around! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 I agree with Hentrik, OCG errors, Inspiration is OP'ed because have 2000 DEF and it's a monster Level 1!!!, ritual effect is bad, not too realistic pictures. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted September 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Yeah, I've discovered Deviant art for pictures now. I thought I did fine on the OCG, but I'm no expert, what did I do wrong? Do you think Inspiration should be like 4 star? Sorry I'm asking so many questions. What's wrong with the rituals? Well, 6/10 isn't too bad... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted September 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Come on, anyone else going to comment? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Yeah' date=' I've discovered Deviant art for pictures now. I thought I did fine on the OCG, but I'm no expert, what did I do wrong? Do you think Inspiration should be like 4 star? Sorry I'm asking so many questions. What's wrong with the rituals? Well, 6/10 isn't too bad...[/quote']Â Yeah Inspiration should be a Level 4 monster.for example correct ritual effect for "Lump of Clay":This card is used to Ritual Summon "Primitive Sculpture". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 1 or more from the field or your hand.correct OCG for "Primitive Sculpture":This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Lump of Clay".This card cannot be destroyed by battle. (and the other thing)all effects are poorly written. that's it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted September 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 Oh, okay, sorry. Can't Lump of Clay be that you must tribute The Artist? Is that not allowed, does it have to be the whole same number of stars thing? By the way, thanks for answering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Oh' date=' okay, sorry. Can't Lump of Clay be that you must tribute The Artist? Is that not allowed, does it have to be the whole same number of stars thing? By the way, thanks for answering.[/quote']Â yes, it has to be the same number of stars or more, but not less. Lump Of Clay i don't know if you can Tribute another monster to Ritual Summon a monster, maybe not. You can Tribute that monster if you want, but the correct Text is the one I gave you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 Ok, thanks, I think I've got it now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaidesgen5 Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 wtf? ???/??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAGNOROK6 Posted May 7, 2010 Report Share Posted May 7, 2010 ?????????????????????yeah, their wierd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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