Cyber Dark Warlord

[sashodada]

Here is my Cyber dark warlord:

[spoiler=Card lore]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned. It can only be summoned by Tribiuting 2 "Cyberdark Edge" and 1 "Cyberdark Horn" you control. If you control 1 or more "Cyberdark" monsters other than this card, this card cannot be destroyed by a card effect. As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Cyberdark" monsters on the field by 500.

 

 

[Coreander]

[spoiler=OCG fix]This card cannot be Normal Summoned. It can only be summoned by Tributing 3 "Cyberdark" monsters you control. If you control 1 or more "Cyberdark" monsters other than this card, this card cannot be destroyed. As long as this card is face-up on your side of the field, increase the ATK and DEF of all "Cyberdark" monsters on the field by 500.

 

 

Artwork is great.

OCG has errors and is kind of weird.If you think of Cyberdark Horn/Keel... it's CYBERDARK,not CYBER DARK.

Effect is okay.You might want to change "cannot be destroyed" to a "cannot be destroyed by a card effect" or something like that.

 

8/10

[KratosAurionX]

i agree, the artwork is really nice, effect seems sorta balanced,

 

Hero's Rating: 8/10

[ragnarok1945]

the effect that it can't be destroyed under ANY circumstances when there's another Cyber Dark monster on the field is a bit too powerful, I'd change it so it can't be destroyed by spells/traps only

 

8/10

[sashodada]

Fixed :-)

[ragnarok1945]

a card's effect is still a little too powerful, but I'll raise the rate to 8.1/10