My first Ritual card

[Artix_Von_Kreiger]

This is my first Ritual card. Please comment and rate. I'll be open to any suggestions.

 

[cube563]

Got some OCG errors to me. 7/10

[Mazerrick]

The Spell is incomplete.

And if you use the mosters effect it can't attack at all.

[KratosAurionX]

The spell has some text missing, and the monsters effect is a little wierd, the way im seeing it is that once you use the effect it cant attack whatsoever..?

[Archwing]

You need to put a cost on the ritual spell card.

And the ritual cards effect is OPed

Other than that its very plain. Mabey add another effect.

[Artix_Von_Kreiger]

I meant to say it cannot attack in that turn, sorry.

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this is my first ritual cards, if ya want to give me pointers PM me.

[Mazerrick]

Look at a real ritual spell before you make one k? Just edit your card

[KratosAurionX]

I meant to say it cannot attack in that turn' date=' sorry.[hr']

this is my first ritual cards, if ya want to give me pointers PM me.

 

alright, in that case the cards effect is OP'd..maybe try lowering to 1 monster.

[ragnarok1945]

your ritual spell doesn't follow what a standard ritual spell is supposed to say

 

the ritual monster has too high atk, and the effect is OPed

 

5/10