green devil Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 these are the first cards i'vve made i hope you like them sorry if they don't show i'm new here and i'm only guessing this is how you do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny2 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 its not sacrifice but tribute and the second pic is overused7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Inferno Dragon Spawn See "Red-Eyes Black Chick" (The effect is identical) Inferno Dragon Overused name, pic is slightly overused, the card is overpowered. OCG Fix (and balancing): Lv.7 ATK: 2500 DEF: 2000 If this card attacks an opponent's monster, you can reduce this card's DEF by 2000. If you do, this card gains 1000 ATK during the Damage Step only. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack during your next Battle Phase. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Overpowered as it's easy to summon and easy to strengthen. You can power it up to 4500 ATK with only a minor cost. Make it a small amount or reduce it's ATK. Also add, it cannot declare an attack during the turn it is special summoned or that would be far too much. Not very original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vailan Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Many OCG errors, but since these are your first cards, it doesn't matter ;). You will learn how to use correct OCG when you create and see more cards. Pics are OK, effects seem OK as well. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moonlight Princess Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 There's OCG errors and the second card is a bit owerpowered but not bad for a first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Second card is OPed, and OCG errors, but M. D already fixed it so 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShootingTheMoon Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Second card is OPed' date=' and OCG errors, but M. D already fixed it so 6/10[/quote'] He is right, and Please make the Name of the Card like this Inferno Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 getting Inferno Dragon from the 1st card's effect is WAY too easy, it should have a drawback on the first card Inferno Dragon is Oped anyway 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Has this been tournament tested yet? I'm sure it would do good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 make first card level 5 or 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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