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Sertinly not me Double Accounting

also

Guys help me make a Monster Card

Maybe the start would be

If your opponent Special Summons a level 5 or higher monster you can Summon this card from your hand. If this card is summoned except for its own effect, you lose 500 Life Points and this card is sent to the graveyard. If your opponent controls a Monster Card you can Remove from play this card to halve the monster ATK and double the monsters DEF until the End Phase of this turn. If this card is Removd from play, you can Tribute 2 monsters whose ATK equils 2300 or more to Summon this card to your opponents side of the field. At the End Phase of the turn, summon this monster to your side of the field. If your opponent activates a Spell Card which destroys a Monster, you can put a Spell Card from your deck to your gtraveyard. In 3 turns put the Spell Card in your hand.

 

Could you please fix the OCG and tell me what to add or remove

And what ATK and DEF it should have

Who ever helps me the most will get 1 rep and 100 points

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Sertinly not me Double Accounting

also

Guys help me make a Monster Card

Maybe the start would be

If your opponent Special Summons a Level 5 or higher monster' date='[/b'] you can Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned by another card's effect, you lose 500 Life Points and this card is sent to the Graveyard -or this card is sent to the Graveyard and you lose 500 Life Points. If your opponent controls a monster, you can remove from play this card to halve the monster's ATK to double that monsters DEF until the End Phase of this turn. If this card is removed from play, you can Tribute 2 monsters whose ATK is equal to 2300 or more to Summon this card to your opponents side of the field. At the End Phase of that turn, Summon this monster to your side of the field. If your opponent activates a Spell Card which destroys a Monster, you can send a Spell Card from your Deck to your Graveyard. After 3 turns, return the Spell Card to your hand.

 

Could you please fix the OCG and tell me what to add or remove

And what ATK and DEF it should have

Who ever helps me the most will get 1 rep and 100 points

I'll help you. Not sure if that'll persuade me. Sorry but this OCG has so many errors I can't even be able to fix all of them. A long effect will be good and it'll be better if you get your OCG right. This effect is straight out cofusing. Link your effects in a way that you won't get confused. Because a random effect pops up after a sentence and then youget confsued. 7.9/10.

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Anyway your inccorect here

If your opponent Special Summons a Level 5 or higher monster, you can Summon this card from your hand. If this card is Summoned except by its own effect, you lose 500 Life Points and this card is sent to the Graveyard. If your opponent controls a monster, you can remove from play this card to halve the monster's ATK and double that monsters DEF until the End Phase of this turn. If this card is removed from play, you can Tribute 2 monsters whose ATK is equal to 2300 or more to Summon this card to your opponents side of the field. At the End Phase of that turn, Summon this monster to your side of the field. If your opponent activates a Spell Card which destroys a Monster, you can send a Spell Card from your Deck to your Graveyard. After 3 turns, return the Spell Card to your hand.

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[spoiler=Shikamaru Nara]

When this card is sucsesfully Summoned place 1 Ninjutsu Counter on this card. Each time your opponent draws a monster card they must state they have and the cards level, each time 1 monster card with 1900 or more ATK points is Summoned place 1 Ninjutsu Counter on this card. Once per turn you can remove up to 4 Ninjutsu Counters from this card in order to select 1 level 5 or below monster your opponent controls, the selected monster can't attack for 2 of their Battle Phases.

 

To be honest I don't care about the OCG I maintain and keep it tidy and I shall learn over time, in the words of Crab Helmet

"OCG is pretty much the least important aspect of card design. YCMers just obsess over it for one reason or another, despite how utterly pointless it is. Personally, my theory is that it's because they're too stupid to make their cards creative and balanced, so they latch on to the one thing they don't suck at; I find that doubting the intelligence of the average YCMer tends to be a valid strategy under most circumstances.""

I just care right now if the effect is balanced in a sense and if it can be used to stratagize.

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Mistypes or it didn't happen. Also no, "except by it's own effect" does not make sense. So you were incorrect on that one. Well you can see I was close to perfect OCG don't you?

 

Also, my version "except by it's own effect" should be correct or you didn't want the effect like that. If so, try "in a way other than this card's effect".

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Mistypes or it didn't happen. Also no' date=' "except by it's own effect" does not make sense. So you were incorrect on that one. Well you can see I was close to perfect OCG don't you?

 

Also, my version "except by it's own effect" should be correct or you didn't want the effect like that. If so, try "in a way other than this card's effect".

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Thats Correct and its staying Like that

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Mistypes or it didn't happen. Also no' date=' "except by it's own effect" does not make sense. So you were incorrect on that one. Well you can see I was close to perfect OCG don't you?

 

Also, my version "except by it's own effect" should be correct or you didn't want the effect like that. If so, try "in a way other than this card's effect".

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Thats Correct and its staying Like that

Fine. You're gonna get it wrong after you post it somewhere else.

@worm: In the showcase section, search YCM moar.

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