destron Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Well, my first finished set . . . ever. Special thanks to redeyeswhitedragon and finnius14. Feedback is appreciated :D. Also, "Destron- Creator of Fear" has been edited again, even though he's in the exclusive section. Anyway, enjoy! P.S. Sometimes, a card may not show up and it will just say or something like that. If that happens, just reset the page. EDIT: I forgot Dark Wolfman #1. He's an effect monster.EDIT: Thanks to Alcander for the new booster cover, mine sucks compared to his!EDIT: I got a holo from Skippy Canoe for "Destron- Creator of Fear". Check it out!EDIT: Took SOME of Abbaton Strikes' advice and edited "Destron- Creator of Fear". See if you like it! [spoiler=Booster Cover] [spoiler=Normal Monsters] [spoiler=Effect Monsters]"Dark Man-Eating Worm"s effect- When this monster is destroyed by a magic or trap card, take 1 "Dark Man-Eating Worm" from your deck and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed by a level 4 or lower monster, you can special summon one "Dark Man-Eating Worm" from you hand."Soldier of Fear #1"s effect- This card cannot be destroyed by a DARK monster. This card is automatically destroyed when attacked by a LIGHT monster. Damage is calculated normally. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, take one "Fear Rising" card from your deck and add it to your hand."The Grim Reaper"s effect- This card can only be summoned by tributing 1 DARK monster, 1 WATER monster, 1 FIRE monster, 1 EARTH monster and 1 WIND monster on your side of the field. You can skip your battle phase to destroy all monsters on the field except this card. This effect cannot be used the turn this card was summoned. This card cannot attack. This card cannot be in face down defense position. If set in face down defense position, switch it face up, but do not change its battle position. [spoiler=Fusion Monsters]"The Banished Wicked"s effect- (Jurassic Warrior + Soldier of Fear #2)This card cannot be special summoned or set. Neither of the fusion material monsters can be substituted. As long as this card is face up on the field, both players can discard cards from their hands during their draw phase before drawing. [spoiler=Synchros and Tuners]"Colossus Black Serpent" [spoiler=Spell/Magic and Trap Cards]"The Last Night on Earth"s effect- Both players' LP become 1. Any effect that increases or decreases either player's LP is negated and destroyed. This card cannot be destroyed. All cards on the field except this card are destroyed. Your opponent can special summon up to 5 level 4 or lower monsters from his/her hand or deck. You may special summon 1 level 5 or higher monster from your hand or deck. Neither player takes damage to their LP as a result of battle. [spoiler=Cards that go together (you'll know what I mean)](Help me with OCG for "Project Ragnarok")"Jurassic Demon"s effect- (1 tuner monster + Jurassic Warrior + 1 non- tuner Dinosaur type monster)You can pay 3000 LP to special summon this monster from your hand. This card cannot attack your opponent's LP directly."Orphiel- Fallen Angel"s effect- This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This monster can only be special summoned by sacrificing 1 level 7 or higher monster on your side of the field. No other tributes are necessary. You can discard two cards from your hand to the graveyard during your Main Phase 1 to select one monster in your graveyard. The selected monster's ATK is deducted from both player's LP. Your opponent gains 1000 LP after damage calculation. This card cannot attack a face down monster."Orphiel's Fallen Dragon of Shadows"s effect- This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned except by tributing 3 level 5 or higher Dragon type monsters on your side of the field. No other tributes are necessary. This card can be treated as an equip spell card to "Orphiel- Fallen Angel" to increase the equipped monster's ATK by 1000. This card cannot attack unless you can tribute 7 cards from your hand. If "Orphiel- Fallen Angel" is destroyed while this card is equipped to it, add this card to your hand. [spoiler=Exclusive Cards]"Destron- Creator of Fear"s effect- (Marco- Master of Fear + Finnius- Slayer of Fear)This card's ATK and DEF becomes Your LP subtracted from 4000. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed, send 3 cards from your hand or from your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. Increase your LP by 1000 for each face-up Continuous Spell Card on the field. When a Continuous Spell Card is destroyed, decrease your Life Points by 1500. During each Standby Phase when this card is face-up, you can change the level of this card from a Level 1 to a Level 12 monster. This card cannot be removed from play. If your Life Points drop to 0 and this card is face up on the field, return this card to your Extra Deck to increase your Life Points by 1.(NOTE: I play with 4000 LP and I base all my cards around a 4000 LP match."Finnius- Slayer of Fear"s effect- (1 level 5 or higher tuner monster + 1 level 7 or higher non-tuner monster)If this card is face up on the field, all DARK monsters, Fiend type monsters and Zombie type monsters are destroyed. This monster's ATK and DEF become the number of DARK monsters, Fiend type monsters and Zombie type monsters in either player's graveyard x500. This card cannot be destroyed by a trap card or the spell card "Raigeki". This card cannot be attacked by a LIGHT monster.(NOTE: Call it old fashioned, but I still use Raigeki!)"Marco- Master of Fear"s effect- Once per turn during your Main Phase 1, you can select a face down monster and a face up monster. The face up monster cannot attack or switch position until your next Standby Phase. The face down monster is switched to attack position and cannot attack or be attacked until your next Standby Phase. Flip effects are not activated and the selected face down returns to defense position after this effect is lifted. If this card is removed from the field, all other cards on the field go to the graveyard and both players discard their hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 overall 8/10 booster could be better and some pictures could be also :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 overall 8/10 booster could be better and some pictures could be also :) yeah, i have paint, so its kinda hard to have great quality pics. plus its an outdated version of paint. double whammie. but thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 some blurry pics, effects are okay, the booster pack could be better(I can do 1 for you, just send me a PM.), OCG errors. 7/10 keep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 blurry pics and ocg errors 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Random Bystander Posted September 2, 2009 Report Share Posted September 2, 2009 Personally, I really liked these cards :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 3, 2009 Report Share Posted September 3, 2009 I will rate these cards later. THIS POST IS ON RESERVE FOR ME. I will do an eyeofthedeck ASAP. EDIT: gonna do it now. Might not finish all of it. [spoiler=eyeofthedeck] First of all, Justice Knight. Name, fairly cliche'd. No effect. Don't make too many vanilla monsters. They're not good. But Justice Knight is weak enough that it COULD be a 4-star monster because it's a Vanilla monster. Picture is ok. Attack and Defense. It's pretty balanced for a 5-star monster but as I've said, it could be a 4-star because it's a Vanilla monster. Also, do all of your cards have to be Limited Edition? Overall: 6.5/10 because it's plain. Onto Rea- Spryder Rider. Fairly good card. Name is not cliche'd. Stats are fine. Pic is fine. Vanilla monsters aren't that kewl though. Still, Limited Edition doesn't suit it. Change most of the cards in this set to 1st edition. Balanced for a four star monster, so 6.5/10 due to Limited Edition and Vanilla. Rose of the Flame. Name is ok, again same card problems. Limited Edition. Vanilla. Picture isn't as good as the rest of the cards. Don't get me wrong, it's still cool but I think it's bland compared to the rest of the pictures. Also, 1620 isn't a good amount. At least make it 1630 because 1620 is ridiculous. 1650 would be even better. Other stats are coolios, so 6.5/10 for the same problems. Now, Soldier of Fear #2. Name is alright, but could be better (something like Ryukichi, Fearsome Warrior). Second, stats are cool with me, but still, DON'T MAKE MANY LIMITED EDITION AND VANILLA MONSTERS! Also, at a second glance at the picture, I notice the gun he is holding behind his head is the rocket launcher from Quake III: Arena and that makes the card sweeter. The picture is definitely coolios. Overall: 6.5/10 for the SAME REASONS!!! Shayll and Wings. Name isn't the best. Picture makes up for it though. Nice stats and Wind suits it. Still, Vanilla and Limited edition. Ok, I'm going to stop saying Limited edition now because you get the point. Anyway, good card. 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 TO EYEOFTHEDECK: 1. why did u only comment on my normal monsters?2. if u hadn't noticed, i made all my cards either limited edition or nothing3. every pack has "vanilla" monsters.4. thank for the compliment for soldier of fear, but in no way is the pic related to quake III. might have inspiration for the artist but i don't think so.5. what does it matter that its 1620? and u say, "at least make 1630 but 1620 is ridiculous." wtf? why?6. any monster that has justice knight's stats cannot be 4 star unless it has drawbacks like panther warrior or dark elf. TO RANDOM BYSTANDER: thank you! i like your name, so it all works out. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 Okay cards...Can you PM me the pics for those Unidentifiable monsters and The Answer and Rucklo? They're awesome!Overall rating: 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I will rate these cards later. THIS POST IS ON RESERVE FOR ME. I will do an eyeofthedeck ASAP. EDIT: gonna do it now. Might not finish all of it. [spoiler=eyeofthedeck] First of all' date=' Justice Knight. Name, fairly cliche'd. No effect. Don't make too many vanilla monsters. They're not good. But Justice Knight is weak enough that it COULD be a 4-star monster because it's a Vanilla monster. Picture is ok. Attack and Defense. It's pretty balanced for a 5-star monster but as I've said, it could be a 4-star because it's a Vanilla monster. Also, do all of your cards have to be Limited Edition? Overall: 6.5/10 because it's plain. Onto Rea- Spryder Rider. Fairly good card. Name is not cliche'd. Stats are fine. Pic is fine. Vanilla monsters aren't that kewl though. Still, Limited Edition doesn't suit it. Change most of the cards in this set to 1st edition. Balanced for a four star monster, so 6.5/10 due to Limited Edition and Vanilla. Rose of the Flame. Name is ok, again same card problems. Limited Edition. Vanilla. Picture isn't as good as the rest of the cards. Don't get me wrong, it's still cool but I think it's bland compared to the rest of the pictures. Also, 1620 isn't a good amount. At least make it 1630 because 1620 is ridiculous. 1650 would be even better. Other stats are coolios, so 6.5/10 for the same problems. Now, Soldier of Fear #2. Name is alright, but could be better (something like Ryukichi, Fearsome Warrior). Second, stats are cool with me, but still, DON'T MAKE MANY LIMITED EDITION AND VANILLA MONSTERS! Also, at a second glance at the picture, I notice the gun he is holding behind his head is the rocket launcher from Quake III: Arena and that makes the card sweeter. The picture is definitely coolios. Overall: 6.5/10 for the SAME REASONS!!! Shayll and Wings. Name isn't the best. Picture makes up for it though. Nice stats and Wind suits it. Still, Vanilla and Limited edition. Ok, I'm going to stop saying Limited edition now because you get the point. Anyway, good card. 6.5/10 [/quote'] You can't do better cards than this ones. Remember he is a new member Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 cool set! but the pics could be alot better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeofthedeck Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 TO EYEOFTHEDECK: 1. why did u only comment on my normal monsters?2. if u hadn't noticed' date=' i made all my cards either limited edition or nothing3. every pack has "vanilla" monsters.4. thank for the compliment for soldier of fear, but in no way is the pic related to quake III. might have inspiration for the artist but i don't think so.5. what does it matter that its 1620? and u say, "at least make 1630 but 1620 is ridiculous." wtf? why?6. any monster that has justice knight's stats cannot be 4 star unless it has drawbacks like panther warrior or dark elf. TO RANDOM BYSTANDER: thank you! i like your name, so it all works out. :D[/quote'] 1. Because I didn't have time to review all of them2. I noticed the Limited edition ones because I only had time to look at the Exclusive ones and normal ones3. Yeah, I know, But I'm just saying, Don't make TOO many of them4. Seriously, the gun looks EXACTLY like it5. Because I've been browsing my card collection and I notice in the old cards (real) that sometimes there is one with 1730 ATK. But I don't think 1620 has ever been done. Still, do what you want, don't let my review stop you, yo're a talented card maker. Very few 1-star members are this good at card making. I wasn't, but partly because I was 7 when I discovered the card maker, 9 when I registered.6. Yeah, I realise that. I wasn't 100% sure, though but I do have proof that monsters can have 2200 ATK and still be 4-star. If you watch Yu-Gi-Oh GX and have seen the entire first season, you will recall the Paradox brthers using a giant spider with 2200 ATK that was summoned on their first turn (Normal Summoned) though it might have a very low DEF to make up for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaidesgen5 Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 NIce. 9.99999999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 thanks for the reviews everyone. i'd just like to u to know that all the reviews above were made after the second edit (with the booster cover). so for the reviews that say that the booster cover isn't great, they are talking about the old one. just thought u should know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb9990jr Posted September 5, 2009 Report Share Posted September 5, 2009 really good some cards has an okay name but only one or two besides that excellent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWPH Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 Nice cards 8/10, especially Dane Cookhow do you make those Booster covers?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 XD, dane cook is just part of my signature, but i'm glad u liked it. also, if u go to tutorials forum there's a whole bunch of stuff for making boosters, or u can buy high quality ones from shop forums. my friend made mine for me, but those are just some suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mortalstandards Posted September 7, 2009 Report Share Posted September 7, 2009 pics could be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted September 8, 2009 Report Share Posted September 8, 2009 Destron- Creator of Fear "Marco- Master of Fear" + "Finnius- Slayer of Fear"This card's ATK and DEF becomes half your Life Points. This card is unaffected by the effects of Trap Cards. When this card is destroyed, send 3 cards from your hand or from your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card. Increase your LP by 1000 for each face-up Continuous Spell Card on the field. When a Continuous Spell Card is destroyed, decrease your Life Points by 1500. During each Standby Phase when this card is face-up, you can change the level of this card from a Level 1 to a Level 12 monster. This card cannot be removed from play. If your Life Points drop to 0 and this card is face up on the field, return this card to your Extra Deck to increase your Life Points by 1. Right edited again for you mate...still far to much going on with this card its not aimed in any direction it just has one random effect after another which makes it confusing. Try to make it so you have maybe 2 Fusion Monsters from the same Fusion Material Monsters may lesson the overal madness of the card, just and idea!! I remember you and I dont ignore PM's for help an advice mate!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted September 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted September 9, 2009 i think i'm gonna keep the beginning part even if it isn't worded right. this way, the closer u r to losing, the higher his strength becomes to help u out. idk, i like him how he is now. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otto194 Posted September 27, 2009 Report Share Posted September 27, 2009 10/10 my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lukeluke123 Posted October 5, 2009 Report Share Posted October 5, 2009 destron, please help me. I don't know how to post any of my cards like what you did. Can you please tell me how, so I can show people my cards.PLEASE REPLY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axrider625 Posted October 7, 2009 Report Share Posted October 7, 2009 U STOLE MY PIC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123gottapee Posted October 9, 2009 Report Share Posted October 9, 2009 Good + bad stuff GoodSome pics i've never seen beforeCreative Synchro and Fusion MonstersNice Effects BadSome pics r overusedToo many Rare+ cards Rating7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sacred Creator Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 With Jurassic Demon...first off Synchro's are part of the fuzion deck so it can never be in your hand. and secondly when you synchro summon a monster the Star level of the monsters used to synchro summon must be equal to the level of the summoned monster. since demon is level 4 and Jurassic Warrior is 4 it is impossible to summon. but otherwise nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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