KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 This is my 1st card. When this card is Summoned and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points, increase your Life Points by 1000. This card is then removed from play. When this card is removed from play, by its own effect, it is Special Summoned after 3 turns. When this card is Summoned and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points, it remains on the field in face-up Attack Position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 interesting and unique effect, OCG is off though (for example the first sentence should be something like When this card is summoned and your LP are lower than your opponent's LP, increase your LP by 1000.) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 ok, i'll fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 i like it. nuff said8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 you can use the OCG thread to help you on the rest of the OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I think it's coolnice effect 7.5/10I will give you 8/10 just 'case you are new :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 OCG correct now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Still got some OCG errors, the effect is very workable with but I'm thinking the monster will need some more ATK. Overall, its a fine card. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 interesting and unique effect' date=' OCG is off though (for example the first sentence should be something like When this card is summoned and your LP are lower than your opponent's LP, increase your LP by 1000.) 7/10[/quote'] I don't see Life Points = LP If its still wrong, can anyone give me the correct OCG? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 First card? This should be your last card, I'll pay you $1 dollar for it and no more. I am surprised you would call something of Pegasus's your own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 First card? This should be your last card' date=' I'll pay you $1 dollar for it and no more. I am surprised you would call something of Pegasus's your own.[/quote'] what??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 First card? This should be your last card' date=' I'll pay you $1 dollar for it and no more. I am surprised you would call something of Pegasus's your own.[/quote'] what??? You heard me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 I still don't understand what you mean, but whats your rating? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 He's probably just messing with you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 No I'm not messing with anybody. I joined this website to make new friends who share my interests, but I don't think I'll be having a playdate with any of you soon because I'm 7 years old and you all seem a lot older than me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Don't listen to him. Great card for a new member. Great picture, and surprisingly minor OCG issues. Well done. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KYF Posted August 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 Only OCG error I saw was that you should state when it is removed. Like say on your standby phase or battle phase or something. Nice effect and pic (although somewhat pixelated) I'll say 9/10. Ugh, I hope we don't have another babyeater (former member) here with lordodf. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lordofd123 Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 No don't listen to him, you should listen to me. the truth comes straight out of the mouth of babes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted August 31, 2009 Report Share Posted August 31, 2009 A very good card some ocg errs but its still pretty creative 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 OCG fix: When this card is Summoned and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points, increase your Life Points by 1000. This card is then removed from play. When this card is removed from play, by its own effect, it is Special Summoned after 3 turns to your field. When this card is Summoned and your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points, it remains on the field in face-up Attack Position. Just something minor. Looks good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon6812 Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 nice yes the ocg is pointed out. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artix_Von_Kreiger Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 Very nice for a first card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted September 1, 2009 Report Share Posted September 1, 2009 OCG fix: to your field dude that's bad, BTW the card has a unique effect, very well done. 8/10 just change the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Merciful Idiot Posted September 4, 2009 Report Share Posted September 4, 2009 I'm 7 years oldThat explains half of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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