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The Koa'ki Meiru Field Spell


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What do you think..picture, name or anyhting, comment/rate please...

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-Effect: During your end phase, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or by revealing 1 Field Spell card in your hand. Once per turn, a player can move 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from any graveyard to their hand. "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters gain 100 ATK/DEF for each "Koa'ki Meiru" card in any graveyard. This card is treated as "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" while it is in your Hand, Deck or Graveyard.

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OCG fix:

 

During your End Phase, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or you can reveal 1 Field Spell Card in your hand. Once per turn, a player can add 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from either player's Graveyard to their hand. "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters gain 100 ATK andDEF for each "Koa'ki Meiru" card in either player's Graveryard. This card is treated as "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" while it is in your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

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For the picture I grant this a 0/10 since I have an overpowering feeling that you KNOW that this belongs to a real card called Iron Core Immediate Disposal except it is reversed and inverted.

 

However OCG Fix (Using your first OCG attempt):

 

"During your End phase, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or by revealing 1 Field Spell card in your hand. Once per turn, a player can moveadd 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from anytheir Graveyard to their hand. "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters gain 100 ATK and DEF for each "Koa'ki Meiru" card in anythe Graveyard. This card is treated as "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" while it is in your Hand, Deck or Graveyard."

 

Bold = Fix
Crossed out = Bad OCG

 

It's good Koa'ki support, however I don't quite fancy them but its still good. 9/10

 

Note: I changed from either's graveyard to just your own because that could prove to be OP.

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ya, I couldn't find a (real) pic so...

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  • 4 weeks later...

I run a Koa'ki Meiru Deck myself and this card would be great for it :) . One thing, bad OCG. This would be my fix of it (changes are in bold):

 

During each of your End Phases, destroy this card unless you send 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from your hand to the Graveyard or reveal 1 Field Spell card in your hand. Once per turn, you can return 1 "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" from either player's Graveyard to their owner's hand. "Koa'ki Meiru" monsters gain 100 ATK and DEF for each "Koa'ki Meiru" card in either player's Graveyard. This card is treated as "Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru" while it is in your hand, Deck or Graveyard.

 

You used the correct OCG for Graveyard at the end of the effect, but not earlier on in it! Also, name should be Pandora's Box of Koa'ki Meiru. If the words the or of are used in a card name, they must be lower case except for if they are the first word.

 

Otherwise, this is a good card, I would definitely use it. 9/10.

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  • 5 months later...

Look i'm building a Koa'ki Meiru deck and this is a great card the only problem i see with it is that it reminds me of light barrier for the arcana force cards, it almost seems like it takes awaty the biggest downside of the Koa'ki Meiru cards and makes them extremely unfair, and if i were you i would have called the Field spell "Koa'ki Meiru: the Artificial Planet" it fits more with the story of Koa'ki Meiru but on a how much i wish this card was real i'd give it a 7/10

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